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Illuminating Soul - George Stal

Illuminating Soul    (COLLABORATION )


by~ George Stal

I had felt this age had won;     
as my sword was rotted as spring appeared.
The earth burst out as a blossom. 
And now saileth in the boat of sunrise, 
come forth, 
O, quiet Heart-
For I have avenged thee 
on the day when thy dead shall live anew. 
Shutting thy eyes on the world, 
sublime in thy abnegation. 
See it break on thy face; 
Soul illumes* 


by~ Poet Destroyer

Ageless with the world that comes and goes.
Mist Upon this blossom Morn,
Thy eyes bleed for the beauty arising -	
Your gentle hues atop the green lawn
Casting a rock~ upon the horizon land. 
The world grant's the sun a final flirt of passion.
I will taste the silent air'
Longing on a new deathbed!
With earth breaking the intimate and final push.
Soon thy will see the silver line
Send it down thy watery grave,
Thy soul will illuminate and sublime with the universe.

~A Poet Destroyer Collaboration~

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Skat A

Date: 2/4/2016 10:52:00 PM

lovely a perfect poem **SKAT**

Harry Horsman

Date: 12/30/2012 4:07:00 AM

this is wonderful Linda, glad i've seen a poem i have not read before.... happy new year.. love your poetry...

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 11/9/2011 1:43:00 AM

Yo, I thought this was titled ILLUMINATI Soul...by STALEN ....Till I unfogged my specs! Thank Jeeee-Heeesus Stalin, Hitler, Lenin or anyone of those mass murders are dead and not on the soup....Ha Joking. This is a tight poem by the PDESTROYER! always nice work!

Nathan D.

Date: 10/27/2011 10:06:00 AM

you give people a chance to collab with you and this is what you get .... great job!!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/30/2011 10:00:00 AM

wow, I think you did great with this one, Irma. check out my reply to kash if you haven't yet. I had great fun with it. well, I'm making myself late for work today!! Luv, Andrea

Don Johnson

Date: 8/30/2011 1:54:00 AM

deep sort of poetry here, the sun a final flirt of passion, like those words that appear, thank your babe for my ration:)

Wilma Neels

Date: 8/30/2011 1:35:00 AM

This one is really stunning, enjoyed it too ;-)

Sandy Ivy D

Date: 8/30/2011 1:29:00 AM

I'm enjoying your collaborations' S.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/28/2011 10:56:00 AM

wow PD my BFF this is deep and heavy luv.. an excellent piece from both of u my friend and good luck once again..don't know how u compliment us all with your passionate words but u do ..your BFF for life on Florida Funfest..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/28/2011 10:42:00 AM

Your muse is in full swing, P.D. thanks for sharing

Judy Ball

Date: 8/28/2011 7:42:00 AM

The wirding here is beautiful. It makes me think of a sunrise but it also brings to mind that life is a circle. Great job here. God Bless, JB

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 8/28/2011 3:14:00 AM

Because of my eye problem I avoid sitting much on computer hence I could not visit yours and even others poems much. Although it is better now but not fully normal. It may take some more time. It was a pleasure to see you on my poems. Hope you liked the Video Poem. Love and best wishes ..Ravindra

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 8/28/2011 3:11:00 AM

Amazing lines splashing the beauty of soul in this beautiful Poem my friend PD. You both done wonders in this lovely write. 'Ageless with the world that comes and goes. Mist Upon this blossom Morn' beautiful lines and even George too has done a wonderful work 'I had felt this age had won;as my sword was rotted as spring appeared'. I am so happy by mark change in your Poems now getting more and more deeper and philosophical.conti.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/28/2011 12:38:00 AM

thank you George,. another pleasure with another great poet here on the soup. It was a delight,..p.d.