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Illest of Reasons

Four joints excercising their right to tense up Oh how the Pancreas aides in such a drawstring. Conscience kidnapped for a spell while these fierce, No, cowardly beings earn their way into darkness. Like the pedophile with no child, sitting in the playground "just reading a book" while children play. What a facade! We know why both exist It's the sickness, No fingers to mouth, pondering, posing questions. That neither know, it's their vision changed the make-up so they feel normal When alone.

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Date: 7/28/2009 12:36:00 PM
Thank you so much for the explainaion;). I would use knuckles in line 1 just to start the poem off with a ..bit...clearer idea (one will still need to think on the lines and it will still give layered meaning) such as why..drawstring? Most will have no idea what the pancrease does..I'm a massage therapist and should have remembered but didn't...the two extemes of violence, madness and brute force?..That niether brute nor madman can answer..Their vision changed....
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Date: 7/28/2009 9:42:00 AM
Goodness...who comprises the neither in the last verse? The verse sounds profound if I could get some sort of handle on at least the first few lines? 4 fingers???Who are the cowardly beings? Light & Love
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