Ill Wind of -. 2

Ill Wind of ….     2




Powerful beings we are


A marvellous construction of senses

And intricacies

From the detail of touch

To atomic building blocks

With which to deliberate

Theorise

Awareness 


A billion synaptic passages

Along nerve ends which equate 

Every nuance existent

That traverses a teacup to a mouth


And how we create !


In Van Gogh colours

And musical diverse overtures

How we dream

In perception and the inspiration

And bring form 

To what we conceive


Ah ! And how we love ! 



In the very arms of creation

This birth of ours

And at one time we new

And beheld the awe of life

Indivisible

From the hand of the Universal

Connected to

Content of

The miracles proclamation

Of life


………………………………………………….. how then have we become

so belittled

to no longer see

a state of perfection

ill wind indeed

to say we are “fallen”

from the trees and fruits of Eden


how far now have we been led astray

to think

that each and everyone one of us

unworthy of heaven


what despicable lie

of gold stained shrouds

led us to cast aside the truth

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 5/3/2009 11:35:00 AM
Hey Colin, been away from the soup, but I see your poems are still writing you. : ) How lucky for us! And what an ending question. Your poems invade our very being. Well done sir poet of poets. Love, shar
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Date: 5/2/2009 7:23:00 PM
My dear friend I think you know my beliefs, not religious but deeply spiritual. I personally believe that through Christ we are all made worthy. Im sure you already knew that though. The prophesies are what convinced me. Things prophesied in the beginning coming to pass in the new testament. Too many to fake. I respect you and your talent and your intelligence rocks, loveudo, Laurie
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Date: 5/2/2009 4:54:00 PM
This is a beautiful write brother...the Van Gogh verse is awesome..well done.
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