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I'll Whisper In a Note

"I'll whisper in a note"

gentle pastel colors by day
soft as the light and warmth of sun
vibrant loud colors by night
vivid as the beam and guide of moon
the colors turn with flowing sands
still there lies what you are to me
vibrance that fills a rainbow day
softness that define secrets of love
with true sentiments from me to you
what you are I'll whisper in a note

SkyWatcher
05-10-23

loveromancelight verse

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Andrea Dietrich

May 14, 2023 at 11:12 AM

Love this, Lisa. Thanx for all your sweet comments. This poem is a fave for me

Lisa Ricci

May 16, 2023 at 8:02 AM

Good Morning Andrea. Hi. I'm sorry for this late response. Thank you ever so much as always. Words do not express my appreciation that you liked this particular entry. Truly. Thank you. Have a wonderful day. Keep enjoying poetry. Blessings always (smile)

Line Gauthier

May 14, 2023 at 6:48 AM

So sweet ~ have a lovely day, Lisa ~

Lisa Ricci

May 16, 2023 at 7:53 AM

Good Morning Line. Hi. Thank you very much. I'm sorry for this late response. Your comment is most gracious. Have a wonderful day also. Keep enjoying poetry. Blessings (smile)

Gordon Mcconnell

May 12, 2023 at 3:57 AM

Lovely penning Lisa, such nice light lines that encaptures the heart. Have blessed weekend,Gordon x

Lisa Ricci

May 12, 2023 at 4:37 AM

Hello Gordon. Good Morning. Thank you so very much for such a gracious lovely review and comment as soft and gentle as love itself. May this day find you well. Have a wonderful day and weekend. Blessings back to you thank you. (smile)

Paul Bell

May 11, 2023 at 8:19 AM

Love the sexy undertones in your poem. Colours sure define our mood, day and night. Would this be a short note.

Lisa Ricci

May 11, 2023 at 10:56 AM

Hello Paul. Wow, thank you ever so much for such a review and commentary as well. Truly. Your mention of it being a short note makes me smile. Have a wonderful night. Thank you again. Blessings and Take Care... (smile)

Victor Buhagiar

May 10, 2023 at 11:13 PM

You whisper a romantic poem.

Lisa Ricci

May 11, 2023 at 3:05 AM

Victor Victor Victor. Hi. Thank you ever so much. Truly. Have a beautiful day in every way. I will see you on your page. Love and Blessings now and always. (smile)

Daniel Turner

May 10, 2023 at 8:15 PM

I love this one too, Lisa. I wish you would whisper to me! LOL This one is sexy! Is this the real Lisa? WOW!!!

Lisa Ricci

May 11, 2023 at 3:11 AM

Good Morning Mr. Daniel. You are a treasure. Truly. Saying thank you doesn't seem enough to express my appreciation but here it is "thank you". And yes, ha ha, this is the real lisa (ha ha again). I hope you continue to write for yourself or at least perhaps find a local poetry contest to enter. For example, last April I entered a poetry contest with one of my local libraries and to my surprise I won. I was beyond thrilled and grateful and I was able to read my entry out loud. It was an experience I will never forget. The experience and contest was nothing like the contest on soup. Blessings now and always. (smile with many thanks Daniel)

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