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I'll Cry No More For You

Seems long ago - a distant time, at first when I saw you My heart did leap within my chest; was love to spring anew? I should have known, I couldn't see, enthralled I was with you The guard that was upon my heart had lifted and withdrew When from the start our passion flowed - so intimate were we We'll stand a test of time and stay as close as two can be Long walks beneath the twilight skies and joyous times we shared We spoke of secrets buried deep and still our passion flared Betrayal! sudden and complete - a knife has pierced my heart! Your other "lover" on the phone?!? You Cheater!! It's time to part!! Oh ache, oh heartache go away; sweet sleep, please come to me These tears, these rolling tears must stop - I need to be set free! How sad it is when love runs cold; Loves' flames die down and wane The mind is filled with memories; the heart is wracked with pain Too long I've felt this emptiness in finding you untrue And though I'm filled with sadness now - I'll cry no more for you

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Date: 4/16/2016 10:56:00 PM
Neva. Congrats on your great win.... LINDA
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Date: 4/19/2016 2:07:00 PM
Hey Linda, a truly sweet surprise to hear from you and thanks so much for the congrats. It means a lot to me. Be Blessed, Neva
Date: 4/13/2016 1:58:00 PM
Congratulations Neva, well done...
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Date: 4/14/2016 3:04:00 PM
Hey Charlie, thank you so much for your kind words and comments on my poem! It's a wonderful surprise for me and I do appreciate you taking the time to read and share your thoughts with me. I look forward to enjoying your poems too! Be Blessed, Neva
Date: 4/13/2016 12:56:00 PM
Neva, Congrats on your win. Thank you for supporting my contest **SKAT**
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Date: 4/14/2016 3:03:00 PM
Hey SKAT A, Wow! Such a wonderful surprise from you!! I truly do appreciate this honor and it warms my heart that you think so highly of my poem "I'll Cry No More For You". Thank you so much, SKAT and I will be sending congrats to the other winners for their wonderful poems winning too! Be Blessed, Neva
Date: 4/9/2016 6:38:00 AM
Awfully sad, but very well written!
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Neva Romaine
Date: 4/13/2016 9:10:00 AM
Hey Roxy, thank you so much for your visit and comments on my poem. I do appreciate it so much, and I look forward to enjoying your poems as well. Be Blessed, Neva
Date: 1/8/2016 8:58:00 PM
This is a very sad and touchy poem my dear but very beautiful too , hugs / / :) dalia
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Neva Romaine
Date: 1/11/2016 3:52:00 PM
Hey Dalia, thank you so much for visiting me and for your insightful and sweet comments on my poem. I look forward to visiting with you too! Be Blessed, Neva
Date: 11/10/2015 12:51:00 PM
Beautifully written couplets Neva. Wonderful flow and sad but nice subject.
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Neva Romaine
Date: 11/12/2015 8:33:00 AM
Hey James, thank you again for your visits, support and wonderful comments on my poems. I do appreciate it so very much. Be Blessed, Neva
Date: 10/27/2015 11:50:00 AM
and that's a strong decision..stay strong and happy friend..love and peace to you :) :*
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Date: 10/27/2015 1:21:00 PM
Hey Remnants, thank you so much for visiting with me and for your sweet and encouraging comments on my poem. I really do appreciate it. Be Blessed, Neva
Date: 10/23/2015 5:55:00 PM
"Betrayal! sudden and complete - a knife has pierced my heart! Your other "lover" on the phone?!? You Cheater!! It's time to part! Oh ache, oh heartache go away; sweet sleep, please come to me These tears, these rolling tears must stop - I need to be set free" And that is exactly how it feels be the betrayed victim male or female! Great poem--A7
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Neva Romaine
Date: 10/26/2015 2:36:00 PM
Hey Robert, thank you so very much for your visit and for your keen insight into my poem. Most especially for the reminder that males also experience these deep and hurtful feelings of betrayal too! Be Blessed, Neva
Date: 10/16/2015 9:27:00 AM
I feel your pain. Thanks for suggesting I read this one. Betrayal comes in many forms. My husband betrayed me for vodka. It sounds ludicrous, but the hold it had on him overshadowed all else in his life. Score one for Satan... A broken hand was my decision-maker. That was 4 years ago, and it took me a while to set my heart free and for the tears to stop flowing, but like you, I cry no more for him.
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Date: 10/19/2015 3:44:00 PM
Hey Lin, thank you so much for finding a moment to visit with me and for your gracious comments and sharing your personal experience with me. We are so blessed to have survived the physical and emotional abuse - our Father has us wrapped in His loving arms. I am looking forward to visiting with you and enjoying your poems also sweet Lin. Be Blessed, Neva
Date: 10/2/2015 2:38:00 PM
Rough situation, so many people know this well...the heartache is hard but moving on, no more tears, keep yer chin up!
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Date: 10/5/2015 12:19:00 PM
Hey Casarah, thank you for finding a moment to visit with me and for your comments on my poem. I do appreciate it so much. Be Blessed, Neva
Date: 10/2/2015 12:53:00 PM
Cheaters never learn
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Date: 10/5/2015 12:16:00 PM
Hey Abdeil, thanks for your visit and comment on my poem. You are so right! Be Blessed, Neva
Date: 9/26/2015 11:43:00 PM
I'm so glad that in the end....you made the right choice which is to close the door on the memories and move on. Thanks for drawing my attention to this wonderful piece, Neva. Well written. Hugs
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Date: 9/29/2015 8:25:00 AM
Hey Eileen, thank you so much for find some time to visit with me and for your gracious and insightful comments on my poem. It means a lot to me. Be Blessed, Neva
Date: 9/18/2015 7:11:00 AM
Neva, this poem is absolutely perfect in every way - it resonates with me like you wouldn't believe. I have been there, my friend, and it is not easy. The last four lines are especially wonderful.
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Date: 9/18/2015 10:33:00 AM
Hey Heather, thank you so much for finding a moment to visit with me. I do appreciate your lovely comments and I am so glad you could relate to my poem. You're right too - it is not easy to overcome. I look forward to enjoying more of your poems. Be Blessed, Neva
Date: 9/2/2015 4:38:00 AM
Dear Neva, just popped in to read some poems. This offering is romantic drama at its best. Love all the couplets but this one jumped off the page for me: 'Oh ache, oh heartache go away; sweet sleep, please come to me These tears, these rolling tears must stop - I need to be set free' Lovely, best wishes~Delice
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Date: 9/2/2015 2:38:00 PM
Hey Delice, wonderful of you to find some time to visit with me. Your precious comments and input on my poem are so inspiring and I truly appreciate it so much. Be Blessed, Neva
Date: 9/1/2015 3:40:00 PM
I love it - absolutely great write ... (been there, felt that - you captured the feel) ... CayCay
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Date: 9/2/2015 2:36:00 PM
Hey CayCay, thanks for coming back to visit and for your comments and input on my poem. I agree, there are so many that relate to this experience.
Date: 8/25/2015 4:43:00 PM
The words are very descriptive.. They are really touching
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Date: 8/26/2015 9:15:00 AM
Hey Sandy, thank you so much for finding a moment to visit me and for your insightful comments on my poem. I appreciate it so much and will enjoy reading your poems as well. Be Blessed, Neva
Date: 6/16/2015 4:48:00 PM
Yes, time to get over the regret and move on. Sad one, and well describing the pain of betrayal.
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Neva Romaine
Date: 6/17/2015 8:57:00 AM
Hey Andrea, thanks so much for dropping by and commenting on my poem. Be Blessed, Neva
Date: 6/3/2015 10:16:00 AM
Neva, i love the imagery but indeed the poem speaks the colors of love untrue and changing.... anyway, we all need to move on and love again!!~olive eloisa
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Neva Romaine
Date: 6/4/2015 1:11:00 PM
Hey Olive, so glad you found a moment to visit with me and I always appreciate your input and deep insight. Thanks again sweetheart. Be Blessed, Neva
Date: 6/3/2015 12:00:00 AM
Neva, so much hurt, yet the words are strong. Keeping things good... enjoyed SKAT
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Neva Romaine
Date: 6/3/2015 9:15:00 AM
Hey SKAT A, nice of you to drop by and for your very nice comments on my poem. I appreciate it so much. Be Blessed, Neva
Date: 6/1/2015 8:00:00 PM
I was carried by your Poem. It's heart breaking. Nice piece.
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Date: 6/2/2015 3:09:00 PM
Hey Khrysstine, I am so honored that you found a moment to visit with me. I do appreciate your heartfelt comments on my poem. I do appreciate it so much. Thanks again and Be Blessed, Neva
Date: 6/1/2015 4:10:00 PM
Neva, your poem is heartbreaking, so full of sad emotions and hurt, it started out so lovely and flowing and then the dagger of pain, so well written and thanks for visiting my poem, shameonyou
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Date: 6/2/2015 3:00:00 PM
Hey Broken Wings, so glad you found a moment to visit me. As always, I do appreciate your input and comments on my work. You are such a sweetie pie. Be Blessed, Neva
Date: 5/30/2015 11:09:00 PM
I feel you, Neva. A heartrending piece, yet I am glad to read the positive declaration with the last line. God bless, Neva. Kim
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Neva Romaine
Date: 6/1/2015 1:13:00 PM
Hey Kim, so nice of you to visit me. I do appreciate your comments on my poem. So many people go through this terrible experience and I was moved to put it in words. Be Blessed, Neva
Date: 5/29/2015 1:10:00 PM
So sad, how can they. had it done many times to me. it not only breaks your heart, but devastates your confidence as a person. hope this is not true. but I feel it must be, so well written. a huge hug and my best wishes. Pete. 7.
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Neva Romaine
Date: 6/1/2015 1:09:00 PM
Hey Peter, thank you for visiting me and for your sweet comments on my poem. I have witnessed so much hurt in this way from family, friends, etc. that it moved my heart to put in words what they have gone through past and present. Be Blessed, Neva
Date: 5/28/2015 4:01:00 PM
I'm sure there are many who can relate to this. I love how this ends. Thanks for sharing!
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Neva Romaine
Date: 5/29/2015 8:20:00 AM
Hey Laura, thank you so much for your visit and nice comments on my poem. I do appreciate it so much. Be Blessed, Neva

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