I'Ll Bloom One Day

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I may have mishap. But I will very soon sprout. I shall one day bloom.

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Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 8/22/2021 8:54:00 AM

A quiet wait until a sprout that will in time bloom. What a nice thought...Delice

Sotto Poet
Date: 8/22/2021 11:15:00 AM

Thank you so much, Delice, for your nice words and delightful comment. I hope you're having a good weekend.

David Kavanagh

Date: 8/22/2021 6:30:00 AM

Just like not all buds bloom Lasaad, not all ideas do either, but other shoots will take there place eventually, and reach a full bloom, as will other ideas, I see this message in your wonderful haiku, cheers David

Sotto Poet
Date: 8/22/2021 11:18:00 AM

You are correct, David, not all dreams come thru, thank you so much for your nice words and insightful comment. I hope you're having a good weekend.