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I'Ll Be Gone

Every day I love you more
every day you become more silent than before
feels like I’ve hit a brick wall
I promised myself I would stand tall
love can be amazing
when it is actually blazing 
with no hidden plays
only receptive hearts on display 
I can’t wait forever with my heart on my sleeve
one of these days I will have to leave..

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Keyonda Aldana

Date: 8/24/2025 3:27:00 PM

• Painful • Emotional • I'm Sayin • Perfectly Penned • Facts • Bookmarked My Favorite Poem

James Fraser

Date: 9/4/2010 11:41:00 AM

A write from a heart being hurt or ignored, there's a sadness in your words Wilma >> James

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 9/1/2010 2:56:00 PM

I know what you mean, dear Wilma. That lack of communication is a nightmare sometimes.... Thank you for your nice comments. Love, iolanda

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/1/2010 6:45:00 AM

There was probably a time when he showed more affection and that makes it even more difficult to let go when you feel him drifting away. Inside, there is a feeling that the love will magically reappear. Speaking from experience, it doesn't seem to work that way though. It is a difficult choice to leave, but if he doesn't return your feelings, what other options do you have aside from setting yourself up for more of the pain you describe here, Wilma. Very sad but well expressed! Love, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/31/2010 11:07:00 PM

Good poem and it goes very well with its title. Nice hearing from you today Wilma. LUv, Andrea

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 8/31/2010 2:35:00 PM

Only you know when enough is enough..powerful write, been there a few times....luv Michael

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 8/31/2010 12:44:00 PM

aaack the pitfalls of love indeed...hopefully that certain someone is not as dense though-- lol this is just me thinking theoretically... & yup!! just dropping by to say hi --haha was actually emailing you... lol hugs nikko :)