I'Ll Be Back

Hardships have hit my ego,
like a kick-boxer punching a douche bag;
my record as an artist has been compromised;
my back has been against the wall for too long.

My painting style looks clashed; different emotions
with color, interbred in a single canvas; "......if all these emotions
fit into a single person, he or she would be a psychopath!" 
they scorn.

But, like a phoenix from the ashes,
I will become relevant like Da Vinci;
I will the sitting in the Hall of Fame;
just wait and see!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 8/14/2014 9:14:00 PM
I like that psychopath line, very spot on! Grats on your win :)
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 8/15/2014 1:21:00 AM
Lol. Thank you very much for your warm applause Casarah! ^_^
Date: 8/14/2014 8:25:00 AM
Back wid big congrats Teddy on ur awesome win!
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 8/14/2014 8:37:00 AM
Oh, lol. Sorry Dr. Upma. I think your comment accepted the reply that was meant for Dr. Ram Mehta..... Internet having a sense of humor... lolest. Thank you very much for your kind applause Dr. Ram Mehta! ^_^
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 8/14/2014 8:33:00 AM
Thank you very much once again Dr. Ram Mehta! :-)
Date: 8/14/2014 1:00:00 AM
Congrats on the fine win in the contest, Teddy
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 8/14/2014 8:38:00 AM
Thank you so much again Dr. Ram Mehta! :-)
Date: 8/11/2014 6:25:00 AM
Oh is this for the contest?? It's really good and thanks for the comments on my poems
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 8/12/2014 3:57:00 AM
You are always welcome! ^_^
Date: 8/1/2014 4:05:00 AM
A masterpiece Teddy ! you will surely be back n i will wait ,,, gl in contest !
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 8/2/2014 1:57:00 AM
Thank you for wishing me, and sacrificing your time to wait for me, Dr. Upma! ^_^
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