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Ikigai
Petals in Stillness

Daniel Henry Rodgers

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“As the garden turns petal to pine
mist to morning light....
we walk the cool quiet arc of purpose
where life flow meets ritual
time becomes meaning.”

- Poet

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Spring — Passion

Kintsugi dawn—
white plum scents night air
tea rises in stillness.

Cranes cross pale sky;
child laughter drifts on moss.
A garden remembers.

Summer — Vocation

Tatami breathes—
cicada shells cling
reborn softly.

Koi flicker below
ripples fade in quiet hands.
Evening thunder calls—

incense drifts
forms bow.

Autumn — Mission

Fox lanterns kindle
shoji float through silver mist—
ancestral spirits stir.

Stray dog nestles
by the gate;
even strays seek warmth.

Tea vapor
recalls morning.

Winter — Profession

Snow settles
on stone lanterns
pine needles in palm.

Cold brushes fingertips.
Crane arcs slowly—
silhouette lingers on old walls.

Work kneaded
with laughter;
fire clothes darkness.

Completion — All Seasons as One

Sakura scatter—
petals dance
mirror tea vapor.

Breath holds the garden.
Circle closes
opens anew.

Tea cools,
reflects sky—
time folds gently.

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Date: 8/18/2025 3:03:00 PM
WOW!! What a wonderful set of Haiku writes. I like how you walked the read through the seasons. Great picture and great quote... Have A Blessed Day Writing Away............
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Date: 8/18/2025 7:30:00 AM
My friend, I wish I could write such brilliant haikus. Each season is special. each with its particular imagery and the finale is simply brilliant.
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Date: 8/18/2025 7:08:00 AM
Dearest Daniel, the way you've connected the garden's rhythms to the passage of time, purpose, and meaning is truly remarkable. Each stanza is a masterful blend of sensory detail and emotional resonance, inviting the reader to slow down, breathe deeply, and appreciate the beauty in every moment. This poem is a treasure, a celebration of life's preciousness and the interconnectedness of all things. Your poem has essence of japanese literature, my dearest friend. With love and respect always, Anne
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Date: 8/18/2025 5:33:00 AM
John Fleming will love these. He's been experimenting with Asian poetry. You seem to have a clear grasp of Asian culture. It really shines through your series of haikus/lyrics Daniel. You must have a fondness for the eclectic nature of mankind
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