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my flesh tingles when I am in sight of you;
oh my demons lose control as you undress slowly,
and my heart thumps and skips beats,
as my palms start to sweat and shake
when you strip your bare flesh in front of me
and come over and place your soft hand on my rough cheek
and I shall kiss you,
kiss you on your bare flesh,
as your jewels shine and blind my eyes
I fall more and more for you;
I shall whisper in your ear- and for we will go into-
a heartland of love and I shall make tender sweet love to you,

come to me my dear,
with bronze flesh that shivers in the cold,
but stays warm when next to mine,
love is nothing but tingling flesh
and my demons are uncontrollable when I am with you-
come my darling
love is a moments' away- love me more and more,
and I will take you to a wonderland of tingling flesh in the twilight
as white bed sheets are grasped tightly,
and pillows are thrown left and right
and we sail down love canal together alone forever.

.2.25.2014.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Manassian Avatar
February 26, 2014 at 2:40 PM
Hmmmmmm....it's warming up now!!!
Lamoureux Avatar
February 26, 2014 at 8:57 AM
I'm surprised it ook you till poem three to get her undressed. All that kissing must have distracted you *lol* on to part four.
Manassian Avatar
February 26, 2014 at 2:40 PM
RICHARD!!! SERIOUSLY....FIRST LIP BALM AND THEN THIS!!! YOU ARE A TEASE!
Pettit Avatar
February 25, 2014 at 11:19 PM
Wow, what a vicarious experience you put the reader into! In the last line, just replace the word "sale" with the correct homophone "sail".
Walker  Avatar
February 25, 2014 at 8:20 PM
Fire and desire... Well written Tim... Verlena
Smith Avatar
February 25, 2014 at 6:02 PM
This is great Chris ....Tim
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