Ignoring Love

She loves to
ignore me.
Does she love me?
Yes I believe so, our love
is imperfect -like most, predicated on
imbalance, a victim of
poor timing, but living the old
lie of immortality…..is it really
an untruth?  Is it mortal?
Will it one day die?  I pray not.
At the end of all of it and everything
-it’s all I can give,
deathless love is rare, I have nothing
greater to offer, a love that will
outlive my life, outlive all things…..
I need to refocus, this doesn’t matter,
you see –she still ignores me.
I think she takes pleasure in it,
she does it so well.
Does she love me?
…..I think so, maybe

Written in Texas -AUG 2012
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Brigham Avatar
July 16, 2013 at 3:24 PM
I can't blieve this hasn't received any comments yet. I love everything about this poem. It's one of the best ones I've read on here so far. Great wonderful poem!
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July 16, 2013 at 3:46 PM
Thank you so much, your very good as well. Please continue to read and share your comments and I will do the same! Thanks!!!
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