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If You Were Mine

If you were mine… 


If you were mine…our footsteps would

dance on moonlit verandas while 
candle light flickers enchant my heartbeat
when your arms wrap tightly around me

become symphonies played to the rhythm of your smile
as we sway in the essence of forever
on cloud soft concertos of affection’s melodic whispers

create eternal echoes singing in harmony with your eyes,
hauntingly dark invitations to my endless destination,
soothing reflections comforting weathered longings

If you were mine…satin beaches would

eclipse tan line passions
beneath glistening waves of aquamarine salt water bliss
gently caressing the depth of our love

entice palm leaf shadows of cooling design weaving embracing patterns
of ocean fed breezes tickling our naked forms
as sea foam fingers probe pearl smooth valleys

glow in sunset tides teasing below star orchid heavens
blooming of every wished for fantasy…
lasting happily ever after upon sandcastles dreams

If you were mine…my life would be

a mosaic of delirious euphoric visions
in constant creative motion delivering sincerely
every ounce of joy your heart could desire

painted in the sweet aroma of everything that is your spirit
vibrant in wonders of fragrant poetic offerings
versed in accordance with your every need

worth living, believing that happiness can begin with a smile
shared along endless streams of cherish blessings,
completely satisfied and forevermore yours

If you were mine…oh, if you were mine

Good night Soupers

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 2/22/2017 8:28:00 PM
Love poem master strikes at the heart again. Never ending metaphors- doesn't your brain get sore coming up with these?
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Date: 2/22/2017 1:57:00 PM
No doubt about it, Chris ... you write Romantic opus of cosmic love poems. Very grandeur and stardust metaphors. Simply beautiful pen you wield. Love your style, Maestro. A 7 all night long. Love always.
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Chris Green
Date: 2/23/2017 9:22:00 AM
Thanks so much Freddie, I appreciate you wandering through my poem and leaving such kind words for me.
Date: 2/22/2017 9:57:00 AM
Oh you sent me on a journey far..to a haven ..a beautiful beach ...and romance...Passion..Longing...Depth..Metaphors.reflecting the warmest desires..A definite Fave..You have the ability to take the reader there with you just with your symphonic words
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Chris Green
Date: 2/22/2017 10:59:00 AM
I am happy you enjoyed the poetic journey my poem sent you on my sweet friend. Thank you for the kindness you always send my way, your nice words always take me on a wonderful journey too. :)
Date: 2/22/2017 7:34:00 AM
Beautiful lines and descriptions, Chris. I agree with Daniel in your ability to write great love poems :)
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Chris Green
Date: 2/22/2017 8:15:00 AM
Thank you my sweet friend, you are always so kind to me.
Date: 2/21/2017 10:24:00 PM
Later:) You write great love poems, Chris.
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Chris Green
Date: 2/22/2017 8:15:00 AM
Thanks so much my friend. I appreciate you saying that.
Date: 2/21/2017 10:01:00 PM
Sleep well Chris, I hope you have good dreams. This was beautiful, a slow dance of longing.
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Chris Green
Date: 2/22/2017 8:14:00 AM
Thanks so very much Darren. I am happy you felt the music in this one.
Date: 2/21/2017 8:49:00 PM
Hello Chris, As I was reading this poem I found myself being in another place. I was lost in reading your poem I found myself being on a beach somewhere. Is what i got out of your poem.
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Chris Green
Date: 2/22/2017 8:14:00 AM
Thank you so much Darlene, that is the reaction I was hoping for. Thank you for joining me on this poetic journey.

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