If You Were God

Walking a mile in God's shoes,
You’d have the blues,
With humanity, the bad news,

If you were God, from above, writing love,...............................................(1 John 4:8 &16)
To a blinded mind, in time, line,
How would you say a light, to dark,
Love written by the hand, of your man,
In your plan,
Him being below, the show,

By metaphors galore, for a darken mind to explore,...............................(Hebrews 10:1-10)
At first, begin disperse,
By particles of first light,
Rebuild the mind’s body of night,............................................................(Romans 12:1-2)
A being lost from his core,
Sacred heart for shore,

For God, such a boring, chore,
Love showing man, his core,
When he doesn’t want, to know more,
Than carnal mind, can store,
And, what’s more,

Using your only begotten Son,
To save a useless son of a gun,
Audaciously, bold and nervy,
The mind, who thinks he’s so worthy,
Has scurvy,

Think, how do you write love’s perfection,
To a darken mind’s defection,.................................................................(Romans 8:6-8)
Who desires perfection,.......................................(Heb. 8:10.)(write it in the sacred heart!)
But headed in the opposite direction,
The mind’s defection, that desires perfection,..........................................(Romans 12:1-2)
Doesn’t know the direction, continues defection,
To outer dimensions, of complex conditions,
Put God in this position,

           God,
With testaments, Old and New,
I can see, you’re a bit blue,
With a third testament, from above, of pure Love,
Written inside, it dosen't hid,
Would you be relieved, from a mind so peeved,
And give Adam and Eve a reprieve,
Your Sacred Heart, is that,  third part,.....................(third level testament of total perfection)
Would you now receive, the new Adamantine please,........................................(Luke 16:11)

The man of earth’s, new body rebirth,
Particles of pure light, Adamantine’s kite,
God’s true wealth in sight, come out of the night,.............................................(Luke 16:11)
The man of earth’s, pure love rebirth,
As Christ above, pure love,

This third level `tis, the Gavel,..........................................................................(Matt.13:8)
Receive and believe,
Bend your knees,
Your Sacred Heart is your core,..........(Mark 11:22-23.)(.Romans 2:28-29) (100% testament)
There isn’t any more,
Love from above,
Signed, your Dove,
With love!!
9-4-09 johnmosesfreeman@yahoo.com

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 2/13/2010 3:16:00 PM
As always a good read. I was reading your comment about 'the yellow' and I thought of God's wonder. Of course the rose is long gone, was 8 or 9 years ago, but I still have the vase and it was a true story as are most of my poems. Ellen
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Date: 11/18/2009 7:52:00 PM
Well I was thinking about u all day for some reason, Moses, and now I just knew when u commented on my poem I had to check one of yours out.. and clicked on this MASTERPIECE which the MASTER would be proud of.. Adamantine.. luv luv luv your sense of style in this poem .. and realized I am glad I am not God for all the many things HE has to contend with every day... wonderful write my friend Moses.. luv again... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 11/13/2009 10:24:00 AM
wow John... your words are powerful. :) Thoughtful and well crafted. Always a great day to read you.
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Date: 11/10/2009 12:24:00 PM
Powerful! i really like this. keep up the great work. thanks for the inspiration.
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Date: 10/16/2009 8:39:00 PM
It is very well written with much depth and a spirit definitely connected to the heavens. I am very intrigued by the last 3stanzas. I believe we are living in the time of a 3rd testament, which I personally believe will be the completed testament and yes, we should prepare our hearts to receive God's grace. "Your Sacred Heart is your core", amazing line. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your comments in depth on my latest poems. Much appreciated. God bless. Sincerely, Caroline.
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Date: 10/15/2009 2:09:00 PM
Hi John this is a true testament to your faith and what true faith can do for all of us because we can be restored and we can be made brand new and as white as snow if we just believe in the power of the Lord and what he can offer us through his blessings if we just open our eyes enough to see that he can offer us an eternity in Heaven if we just change our ways so that we may all go in the right direction so that our spirits may rise some day and enter in to the narrow gates of Heaven, Dean
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Date: 10/15/2009 2:08:00 PM
Hi John this is a true testament to your faith and what true faith can do for all of us because we can be restored and we can be made brand new and as white as snow if we just believe in the power of the Lord and what he can offer us through his blessings if we just open our eyes enough to see that he can offer us an eternity in Heaven if we just change our ways so that we may all go in the right direction so that our spirits may rise some day and enter in to the narrow gates of Heaven, Dean
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Date: 10/15/2009 2:07:00 PM
Hi John this is a true testament to your faith and what true faith can do for all of us because we can be restored and we can be made brand new and as white as snow if we just believe in the power of the Lord and what he can offer us through his blessings if we just open our eyes enough to see that he can offer us an eternity in Heaven if we just change our ways so that we may all go in the right direction so that our spirits may rise some day and enter in to the narrow gates of Heaven, Dean
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Date: 10/11/2009 1:55:00 PM
Amen!
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Date: 10/4/2009 9:12:00 PM
Your words show your faith and so much more linked with verse,,a powerful write of spiritual wisdom and more,,,Thank you for your kind words and especially for taking the time to read my work,,,Blessings..Cecil
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Date: 9/21/2009 3:09:00 AM
Absolutely Awesome!!!
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Date: 9/15/2009 8:09:00 AM
This is an excellent sermon and bible study wrapped within your wonderful and prolific way with words! So many powerful and beautiful verses in this. Blessings always. Love, Robin
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Date: 9/7/2009 9:17:00 PM
This poem is Excellent !... in verse, in content, in the way you layed it out... Just Beautiful... Oh, and of course I love the words from 'Son to save a useless son-of-a-gun... (Your Truck-Driving is Showing (Smile) But, see, we can get the point across without being vulgar... Great Read Moses... MoonBee
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Date: 9/6/2009 9:01:00 AM
this was nice pice from begining to end
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Date: 9/5/2009 11:34:00 PM
Inspiring and deep this is just beautiful thoughts in word ... kind regards Jayne x x thank you for your kind comments on my poem , and sorry I am late in replying :)
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Date: 9/5/2009 10:24:00 AM
John, humbling. My grandson is to join the church Sunday and be baptized the following Sunday. Our prayers are answered. Sara
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Date: 9/5/2009 8:04:00 AM
excellent write about God with a pleasure to read...you re an inspiration of good deeds--charma
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Date: 9/5/2009 12:14:00 AM
MOSES.... WOW.......... Do you ever dull? God has provided you a gift. You are the definition of: "Muse: a source of inspiration."....Well written friend.....:JP]
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Date: 9/4/2009 10:11:00 PM
Very clever way of putting it, as usual it's a masterpiece. God Bless....Karla
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