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If You ,Please

If you, please

If you are gonna mimic me.
Please do not talk to me.
If you are gonna laugh at me.
Please do not look my way.
If you’re gonna make me cry.
Please do not ask me to play.

If you are gonna insult me.
Please do not do it in public
If you are gonna throw me a rock.
Please do not hit me with a stick.
If you are gonna insult my poem
Please do not read it.

Skat

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James Swartz Date: 10/2/2017 8:20:00 PM This is full of emotion and i doubt anyone would insult any of your poetry. I have enjoyed the ones i read. Thank you for sharing them all. Login to Reply

Stephen Pennell Date: 2/17/2016 1:30:00 PM would'nt dream of it good poem Login to Reply

Teddy Kimathi Date: 2/17/2016 6:54:00 AM Hi Skat. I love your honest and emotional take on what it is to be really human.... Congrats for having it featured in the PS home page!!! ;-) <3 Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 8/16/2015 2:41:00 PM Hi Skat....I come in peace...unarmed...to read and encourage. How could I ever make you cry!! :) Hugs // paul Login to Reply

Hailey Comet Date: 7/2/2015 9:42:00 PM A straight up write hitting the point dead on. I love those kind of reads and you wrote it well. If only more would adhere to this message. Simple and sweet, can't go wrong there. Nice! Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 5/27/2015 6:55:00 PM .. This poem needs work, sorry for the rude interruption, I will make changes during the summer, if you want to lend a hand please send soup mail to my inbox, I was beginner when I posted this poem..... HUGS SKAT. ... Login to Reply

Mimi Chattopadhyay Date: 4/16/2015 7:32:00 AM Your very first poem is beautiful! such wonderful words ! i would be pleased to make your acquaintance! Login to Reply

Robin Davis Date: 3/1/2014 1:46:00 PM SKAT Such powerful words in your heart poured out on paper. If this is a real person, I hope they read this and learn not to mess with you. Thanks for the nice comment on my Birthday poem. And yes, my birthday was yesterday. Login to Reply

Harry Horsman Date: 7/10/2013 5:10:00 AM Truly an oldie, Come on Girl need your inspiration, need your input,, although i love what i have just read.... Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 7/7/2013 12:20:00 AM no! Login to Reply

David Smalling Date: 9/29/2010 9:23:00 AM Glad you ended it that way, for there is a poet dear to me, whose comments on my humble write inspire joy and beauty, and to whom I want to say thanks ... for the privilege of calling you friend. Login to Reply

Wilma Neels Date: 7/29/2010 7:11:00 AM Loved this write Irma.. Could have used this a few weeks ago ;) Wilma Login to Reply

Lynette Chachere Date: 5/16/2010 5:42:00 PM amazing as always. i hope you have learned to distant these kinds of people.they don't understand certain things, only the things concerning themselves.you're beautiful in every way, so don't listen!awesome. -Always&Forever Lynette Login to Reply

Laura Mckenzie Date: 4/16/2010 5:38:00 PM Irma~ I'm sorry someone made you feel this way there's always someone with something nasty to say don't let it bother you! By the way I enjoyed this! Laura :) Login to Reply

Audrey Castaneda Date: 4/9/2010 10:43:00 PM IF U PLEASE ; CAN WE TRY AGAIN...I WILL NT GIVE UP. THIS WAS MY LAST RESORT... I CAME ON HERE 2 SAY & GET UR HELLO....... MISSIN U DEARLY IRMA FRM ALL OF US!!!!!!!!!! Login to Reply

Amy Thompson Date: 2/23/2010 7:51:00 PM Dear Irma, Your poem If you, Please is very funny. Who would insult you or laugh at you or throw a rock at you? Not me. I think your poetry is very clever. Thanks for your kind comment on my reposting of wings. Love, Amy Login to Reply

Royal Trevino Date: 2/23/2010 1:59:00 PM nice slam Irma ... Royal T. Login to Reply

Nicole Sharon Brown Date: 2/23/2010 1:20:00 PM Love it! Login to Reply

Doris Culverhouse Date: 2/23/2010 7:57:00 AM enjoyed reading, that is a catch 22, how do I know unless I read it? LOL Login to Reply

Charmaine Chircop Date: 2/23/2010 1:06:00 AM Lovely poem with many sense in it..If we could hurt others and be less hurt..beautiful.touching..Charma Login to Reply

Iolanda Scripca Date: 2/21/2010 11:45:00 PM No, no, no I am not going to insult your poem. On the contrary. Nice slam poetry here, dear Irma. Thank you for your comments. Love, Iolanda Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 2/21/2010 9:04:00 PM hahaha. There is a guy here who likes to insult poems sometimes. If he reads it, I think he will like this one!! I got a hoot out of your last line. LUv, Andrea Login to Reply

Constance La France Date: 2/21/2010 12:26:00 PM Nice going, you tell them, jerks....I just L.O.V.E. YOUR S.K.A.T. POETRY, Irma, you just keep them coming...dear heart Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 2/20/2010 9:22:00 PM I especially like this one.. it is a straight up caution to those who are insensitive to others.. going to make if one of my favorites tonight Irma... good job... enjoyed.. luv.. Linda-Marie... good advice for all ...thankxxx... Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 2/20/2010 3:47:00 AM Interesting write that kinda counteracts the saying that says sticks and stones may break my bones but words will never hurt me. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara Login to Reply

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