If You Miss Arizona

If you miss Arizona that much,
It’s not best to write a poem,
The best thing is to take a plane ticket,
If California tempts you as before,
The best thing is to take a plane ticket.

O cross the Atlantic,
It’s better than reading children’s books,
Visiting Beverly Hills or Phoenix under the sun,
It’s better than writing a love song,
It’s better than painting sunflowers.

Just leave his big yellow chair,
Turn off your television, throw away your brush;
If you miss Arizona that much, tomorrow,
The best thing is to take a plane ticket,
Go To New York, Boston, or Chicago.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023


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Date: 6/8/2023 7:09:00 PM
being in Az it caught my eye. I would miss it being from the east. Looking forward to Beverly Hills and Sedona someday. But instead of a plane I'll take a drive still so much more to see.
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Date: 6/8/2023 10:07:00 AM
I can live vicariously through you yann. For me it would be France or Greece!
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Yann Rolland
Date: 6/8/2023 3:35:00 PM
thanks I am Anaya, enjoyed your comment, travels are a solution
Date: 6/8/2023 9:18:00 AM
First hand experience of seeing a place is much better than watching it on the TV or reading about it ! A very sensible proposition. Enjoyed your poem dear yaan
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Yann Rolland
Date: 6/8/2023 3:36:00 PM
Thanks a lot Valsa, this is what i tried to express sincerely, this is absolutly true and precious
Date: 6/6/2023 10:58:00 AM
haha, I like the way you changed the destinations at the end to other locations. Arizona is HOT but yes , everyplace is better to see it in person.
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Yann Rolland
Date: 6/8/2023 3:37:00 PM
thanks andrea for understandings, have a sweet day
Date: 5/27/2023 8:22:00 PM
You know, you are right! Uh, now, er, yann: Can you lend me a little cash for that ticket?! lol ~ Hard-luck Poet here
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Yann Rolland
Date: 5/27/2023 8:44:00 PM
thanks Gershon travels inspire me a lot, thanks for the reading and commenting
Date: 5/27/2023 12:02:00 PM
You can not always watch life by the side lines, sometimes you just have to see it with your own two eyes, and experience it first hand, I love your original write , its amazing, like you :)
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Yann Rolland
Date: 5/27/2023 8:46:00 PM
thanks Rose, for the supportive comment, i totally agree with experience you talk about have a nice week end
Date: 5/26/2023 6:22:00 PM
thanks Evelyn, i travelled in Arizona, 28 years ago, i memorized a lot of things have a sweet week end
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Date: 5/26/2023 10:52:00 AM
Giving in to the wanderlust is a very appealing idea. Your lovely poem says it so well, Yann. :)
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Yann Rolland
Date: 5/27/2023 8:46:00 PM
thanks Evelyn, i travelled in Arizona, 28 years ago, i memorized a lot of things have a sweet week end
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