If You Insist

I ran into the room, said, "Do I smell bacon?",
but couldn't decipher the smirk Jim was making.
"Sure, if that's what you wanna call it!
Hey, why not stuff your gullet?",
and like a true American I was taken.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Callus Avatar
October 22, 2014 at 12:26 PM
Wow! I love your limerick and the smell of bacon. My father used to buy a big rectangular chunk, smoked, and hang it from a hook on the wall. The smell used to fill the whole house! Needless to say, that chunk never lasted long! // paul
Hicks Avatar
October 24, 2014 at 10:09 AM
Bacon never does sadly... bacon never does. Thank you for checking out my older work!
Manassian Avatar
June 17, 2013 at 10:28 AM
HEE HEE! Good one, Timothy! Hope all is well! :) Being a vegetarian....and NON American...I can still appreciate your gusto! :)
Hicks Avatar
June 21, 2013 at 12:02 AM
Well bacon isn't EVERYTHING... just the only thing that matters (ha ha ha... kidding!). Seriously though I like all kinds of food. They could have been grilling asparagus and I would have been just as elated as the bacon :)
Oyewole Avatar
June 17, 2013 at 8:21 AM
Love the sense of humour you created with your limerick friend. Can't stop laughing.
Hicks Avatar
June 21, 2013 at 12:01 AM
Glad to hear it! :D
Van Breda Avatar
June 14, 2013 at 8:42 AM
So true of your unending array of Restaurants and Take-outs. Every time we visit I gain a couple of pounds. Another poem to confirm you are my Favorite Poet!
Hicks Avatar
June 16, 2013 at 12:32 AM
Wow, Kim... I am touched! Means more than you know!
Lamoureux Avatar
June 14, 2013 at 8:20 AM
What! No new poems?? Either way Good morning Tim
Hicks Avatar
June 16, 2013 at 12:32 AM
I'm slowing down a bit, my friend. I don't like posting when I don't have the time to comment properly!
Thomas Avatar
June 14, 2013 at 6:04 AM
You fell, for the bacon...Lol really cute write:0)
Hicks Avatar
June 16, 2013 at 12:31 AM
Indeed I did... he he. It's just one of those guilty pleasures I suppose!
Ellison Avatar
June 13, 2013 at 2:37 PM
Hey bacon is a Canadian thing!!! LOL Great little limerick... good wishes, Jack
Hicks Avatar
June 13, 2013 at 11:30 PM
I was always curious if what we Americans call "Canadian Bacon" is at all the same thing IN Canada? In any case I appreciate you stopping by, as always!
Tacito Avatar
June 13, 2013 at 9:22 AM
BACON! I love the smell of it, but I can't eat it. Have fun for the both of us. :)
Hicks Avatar
June 13, 2013 at 11:29 PM
Hmm now you have me curious! Religious, diabetic, allergies... which one which one... well I wish you could try it! To be honest I used to hate the stuff, but now I adore it.
Sivey Avatar
June 13, 2013 at 9:04 AM
Ta ha ha ha! You surprise me all the time! What a tremendously hilarious write my friend! I just love your humor my friend! This is an awesome piece, Great Work!!
Hicks Avatar
June 13, 2013 at 11:28 PM
We Americans know how to dine, am I right? :)
Lamoureux Avatar
June 13, 2013 at 7:27 AM
Ummm Bacon!
Hicks Avatar
June 13, 2013 at 11:27 PM
You know what goes with bacon? Uhmm... MORE BACON! :D
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