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If You Had a Name (An Ode To Loss and Water)

If the lovely breeze had a name we could drift together as two dandelion wishes floating wanton on foamy winds. If the river were rolling, gently we could slide in and swim for hours, without rushing and love is like that. Love is like still water standing so deep in a vessel yet so easily broken upon the smallest of stones; scattered, and yet- from this another river begins (as you begin) How lovely if you had a name I would call out to you and I would hear your reply as the wind blowing, the water rushing and not your echoes as you trickled across so many small, jagged stones

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Date: 12/19/2010 7:13:00 AM
Hi Meggan :) sent you soupmail :)
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Date: 11/10/2010 8:45:00 AM
Thank you for reading my work, though you are right, I haven't written a thing in many years.
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Date: 7/20/2010 1:34:00 AM
This is really touching, Meggan... beautiful metaphor you used here and so vividly captured too... I really enjoy your writes :) -- nikko :)
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