Kash Poet Poet Pantoum

If You Could Tread On My Heart

If you could read my mind
if you could tread on my heart,
a rose waiting to bloom you could find
a waterfall about to start.

If you could tread on my heart
in the love garden you could see,
a waterfall about to start
waiting for your nod only.

In the love garden you could see
moon beams hanging in the sky,
waiting for your nod only
to come down and kiss your eyes.

Moon beams hanging in the sky
stars waiting you could find,
to come down and kiss your eyes
it's time you read my mind.

Stars waiting you could find
a waterfall about to start,
it's time you read my mind
if you could tread on my heart.

A waterfall about to start
a rose waiting to bloom you could find,
if you could tread on my heart
if you could read my mind!



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Andrea Dietrich November 1, 2012 at 2:26 PM I see you got on the winners list with a pantoum, same as I. way to go, Kash. It must be from about the time you began learning this awesome poetry form!

Tim Ryerson November 1, 2012 at 3:37 AM Brilliantly done Kash!...Love the 4th verse especially...Congratulations! - Tim

Joseph May October 31, 2012 at 11:15 AM congrats on a great win Kash

Linda-Marie Sweetheart October 30, 2012 at 2:36 PM CONGRATS KASH ON ANOTHER TOUCHING WRITE AND EXCITING WIN LUV .. G R E A TTTT

Anne-Lise Andresen October 30, 2012 at 11:25 AM Congratulations on your winning poems in the "Good Enough" contest. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Len Gasun October 30, 2012 at 7:16 AM Congratulations on your awesome win my friend, Kash! I enjoyed reading your poem! hugs:)LG

Carol Sunshine Brown October 30, 2012 at 7:00 AM Congratulations on your winning poem in SandyIvy's "Good Enough" contest Kash. Love, Carol

Joyce Johnson October 29, 2012 at 9:03 PM A lovely pantoum Kash. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

Poet Destroyer A October 29, 2012 at 8:23 PM Kash, .. Congratulations with your wonderful and "Good Enough" poem in Sandy's contest. xox~PD

Sandy Ivy D October 29, 2012 at 7:21 PM :-) love your good win' thank you' Sandy

Terry O'Leary May 2, 2012 at 6:54 AM Nice structure ... nice imagery... nice... Terry

Dinda Minardi April 30, 2012 at 10:15 AM A very beautiful poem, Kash. I always enjoy your creativity in describing a story by poem. Just incredible :)

Cecilia Macfarlane April 29, 2012 at 8:17 PM Beautiful and touching write....good luck to you in the contest : )

Gwendolen Song April 28, 2012 at 9:21 PM Hey Kash, I grew up listening to this song as my parents were crazy about it...So this means that you are listening to some of the American oldies?...I tried to get u hooked on jazz...no luck...haha. You painted the song with a dazzling poem! Good luck, friend!! Gwendolen

Ravindra K Kapoor April 26, 2012 at 12:09 PM A rare beauty is oozing out in almost stanzas but the third one is extremely beautiful, 'In the love garden you could see, moon beams hanging in the sky, waiting for your nod only to come down and kiss your eyes'. Excellent heart touching write and thank you for your appreciating my series Poem. Love and best wishes....Ravindra ...Kash P

Chittaranjan Dey April 25, 2012 at 11:14 PM Love this nice creation dear poet.

Karen Croft April 25, 2012 at 5:29 PM very beautiful poem. thank you for your kind comment

Andrea Dietrich April 25, 2012 at 3:57 PM btw, that was one of the song titles I too had considered. there were about ten that I loved from the long list of his titles. Have you ever heard that song: If I could read your mind? If not, you need to listen to it at youtube.

Andrea Dietrich April 25, 2012 at 3:56 PM wow, this is awesome, Kash!! King of Pantoums hits another one out of the park. If Francine doesn't place this, she is crazy!

Carolyn Devonshire April 25, 2012 at 3:25 PM Excellent, Kash! I'm "nodding," so bring on the waterfall, flowers and stars of passion. This is really excellent and it is one of Lightfoot's best songs. Winning wishes for you, my friend. Love, Carolyn

Laila Andresen Mjelde April 25, 2012 at 2:58 PM Enjoyed reading your poem Kash! Keep up the good penning, great work!

Carrie Richards April 25, 2012 at 2:05 PM Lovely new lyrics to a favorite song!!!!

Sara Kendrick April 25, 2012 at 12:29 PM Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Mr. Lightfoot was a very prolific write or lyrics...Thanks for stopping by..Sara

David Williams April 25, 2012 at 12:26 PM Kash great Pantoum and super entree for the contest, best of luck and nice to see you around, hope you don't mind but check 5th stanza first line typo..David

Debbie Guzzi April 25, 2012 at 11:39 AM wow you sound so sad BIG HUGS! Light & Love

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