If You Could See Through My Eyes

If you'd see what I see
On sunny afternoon
Someone bathing half naked
Licking ice-cream from a spoon

Another wriggle, there she is 
Nudging up her bra
Trying to adjust knicker elastic
Up whose bum has gone to far

A caterpillars life 
Is far from bored I'll have you know
Politically correct it's such a hoot
Wow, way to go!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 6/24/2015 11:28:00 PM
I came back to this fun one. Every poem I kept landing on, I had already seen it, but hopefully you will write a new one soon!
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Anna-Marie Docherty
Date: 6/25/2015 10:23:00 AM
Smiles, thanks for revisiting but really Andrea, don't worry wait until I'm posting hun... xx
Date: 1/10/2013 6:42:00 PM
this is such a FUN poem. Dang not one person commented except me. Maybe you should repost the oldies that got no comments, Marie. they deserve to be seen!!!
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Anna-Marie Docherty
Date: 1/11/2013 4:07:00 AM
Thanks Andrea, glad you enjoyed and will consider reposts - must admit after the effort of writing and putting up to have several with no comments at all helped make my decision to eventually ease off - and then all the website issues we went through... Appreciate your reviewing, thank you!
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