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If you can't say something nice

“if you can’t say something nice, don’t say anything at all”*  

Such a sweet talker
He could talk a buzzard off a meat wagon
The truth lied in his mouth
Waiting…patiently…
Preying on the moment
Venom dripping from its fangs
The rattle just a distraction
And still they listened
Responded to its plea
For an “AMEN”
As the basket passed
Pennies from the poor
To feed his “privilege”.

She was less subtle
Standing on a street corner
Jingling an almost empty cup
For emptiness draws no attention
She speaks softly
Causing you to slow…to listen
Speaks of need, of loss
Of a longing to serve god
Could you but help her
As she fumbles for the i-phone
Chiming in her pocket

*Flower the skunks mother in Bambi”

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Date: 11/25/2024 6:47:00 AM
Well, hmmppphhh. She shoulda had the sense to put her phone on silent. I have to say she was much better at her spiel than the preacher. Thanks for giving credit to Flower's mother.
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