If You Are Down

If you are down and out, losing hope
Call your friends.
The ones who bring you up
Not the other ones.

Not in the mood?
Of course not.
We hide out when we need them the most.
We retreat when we should be calling for help.

Open the shutters, bring up the shades.
Let the sun reach you.
You like it dark, and dismal and dreary?
It helps you feel miserable, and lost.
Okay.

Before you eat or drink yourself 
Into a melancholic frenzy, please
Let the sun come in just a peep,
Maybe a crack tomorrow, a little bit
More each day.

As soon as it meets you full force,
Your Vitamin D will kick in 
And please turn off the TV
And the electronic devices.
Now is the time to 
Heal, not to 
Ignore 
Your
Heart.


My prayers are with
you my friend.
We have all
been somewhere
like this and it
is not fun.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 7/15/2018 4:35:00 PM
This is so strong and encouraging, there are many days when I'm in the dark and need something like this to bring the sunlight back in-
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 7/15/2018 8:18:00 PM
Open up those curtains and pull out the stops. Better yet, take a walk in nature or call a good friend.
Date: 7/15/2018 12:31:00 PM
The Bible tells us to encourage one another daily.. you certainly did that here!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 7/15/2018 2:25:00 PM
It's sort of my "life's work" Lyric Man.
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