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If Today Is Friday

If today is Friday, joy's on stage Emerging from feeble phase Roaming happily all day For a freedom filled weekend When family reigns supreme Seeking relief from drudgery. If today is Friday, thrill's on horizon Determined to have fun Showing off a budding date Conversing in crowded settings With evening made of dreams, Stealing kisses with every sip. If today is Friday, all is worry free With vibes made of pleasantries And eyes searching happy places Finding ephemeral feelings Ringing inner bells, saying all is well. If today is Friday, it writes own lyrics In special themes of merry verses Composing fervent music Of romantic rhythm and melodies Fending off pensive memories. If today is Friday, opulent smiles Dance the night till day break Cheering newfound friendships Looking forward to next weekend Holding treasures gained Reminiscing transitory moments. February 25, 2018 Friday feeling contest by Silent One

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Date: 4/22/2023 7:56:00 PM
All of us look forward to weekends after the drudgery of office work to spend time with family, plan outings and enjoy some happy private moments. "If today is Friday, it writes own lyrics/ In special themes of merry verses".... Beautiful lines ! Lovely poem.
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Date: 12/18/2018 7:28:00 PM
Hi Vijay, you sure have got that Friday feeling and what a wonderful Friday it can be when your mind does sing its praise. This is the Friday for me my friend. Have a wonderful Wednesday. Your friend always....Mike.
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Date: 4/9/2018 5:08:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Vijay. Well done.
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Date: 3/25/2018 6:05:00 PM
"cheering new found friendships". Being on P.S. and finding new poet friends is what that line made me think about. Congrats, I wrote a funny 1 also about Fri. you enjoy. See ya.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/26/2018 7:55:00 AM
Thank you Barbara.
Date: 3/12/2018 8:16:00 PM
Love that repeating line, Vijay, works well as the title. Congratulations on your placement. If I had to pick a favorite stanza, it would be #4; but they all are excellent small vignettes.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/13/2018 5:37:00 AM
Thank you RAP.
Date: 3/12/2018 7:54:00 PM
Congratulations, Vijay. A fine job in the contest. Lovely write.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/13/2018 5:37:00 AM
Thank you Rhoda.
Date: 3/12/2018 10:09:00 AM
A wonderful poem that expresses the joys of Friday, Vijay. Congratulations on your placement in the contest. Sandra
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/12/2018 12:22:00 PM
Thank you Sandra.
Date: 3/11/2018 12:51:00 PM
- Congratulations on your winning poem, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/12/2018 12:22:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise.
Date: 3/11/2018 10:13:00 AM
Congratulations for your win Vijay :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/12/2018 12:22:00 PM
Thank you Heidi.
Date: 3/11/2018 9:13:00 AM
You summed up Friday very well, I have the same feeling... Congratulations on your placement..
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/12/2018 12:21:00 PM
Thank you Silent One.
Date: 3/8/2018 10:23:00 AM
WoW! This is some straight-up beautiful poetry, Vijay. The imagery feelings expressed are supremely universal. We've all felt this way, sometime or another, when the weekend ushered in. A very humane picturesque poem. Love and smiles always.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/12/2018 12:21:00 PM
Thank you Freddie.
Date: 2/28/2018 6:47:00 AM
Beautiful images of my favorite day of the week before I retired. "If today is Friday, it writes its own lyrics," as a poet, we all like this thought.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/28/2018 10:51:00 AM
Thank you for your visit and kind words, RAP..appreciate your feedback.
Date: 2/25/2018 6:07:00 PM
You make me really want to do my own Friday poem. I LOVE this day of the week. Your poem really captures WHY it is the best of all the days!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/26/2018 5:36:00 AM
Looking forward to reading your poem Andrea..many thanks for your comments.
Date: 2/25/2018 1:14:00 PM
Love how you find joy in the weekend and the upcoming week! Nice, Vijay!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/25/2018 4:38:00 PM
Thanks Kim for your thoughts...I really meant the upcoming weekend.
Date: 2/25/2018 12:11:00 PM
Very well penned, Vijay. This will certainly do well in the contest.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/25/2018 4:37:00 PM
Thank you Rhoda..appreciate your comments.
Date: 2/25/2018 10:18:00 AM
Fridays brings us melodies and thrills...Nicely expressed Vijay
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/25/2018 11:15:00 AM
Thank you Joseph..appreciate your kind words.
Date: 2/25/2018 9:19:00 AM
This is well written Vijay and brings the reader right into the good feelings that come with Fridays. Very nice :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/25/2018 11:15:00 AM
Thank you Heidi..appreciate your kind words.
Date: 2/25/2018 7:40:00 AM
Excellent. Well penned. Thanks for sharing it.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/25/2018 11:14:00 AM
Thank you Ravi..appreciate your comments.
Date: 2/25/2018 7:04:00 AM
Hey, I like that...Maybe I can write one too...Friday is my favorite day...Enjoyed your poem...All the best my friend...
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/25/2018 11:14:00 AM
Thank you Arturo..looking forward to reading your poem on this subject.
Date: 2/25/2018 6:54:00 AM
Sounds like a lovely Friday!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/25/2018 11:13:00 AM
Thank you Kim..appreciate your comment.
Date: 2/25/2018 6:54:00 AM
- A happy Friday, Vijay :) ... optimistic pleasure of the weekend ... "Dance the night to day break" ... it's just memory now :))) - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/25/2018 11:13:00 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise..appreciate your thoughts.

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