Line Gauthier Poet Free verse

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If They Only Knew

so serene
so calm
a blue marble
drifting through blue skies
across the galaxy
serenaded by eternity

and yet under the clouds



AP: Honorable Mention 2022

Submitted on November 20, 2022 in A BRIAN STRAND PREMIERE CHOICE sponsored by BRIAN STRAND  -  RANKED 3RD

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Linda Alice Fowler November 26, 2022 at 7:51 AM Congratulations on your win Line! :) Line Gauthier November 26, 2022 at 8:46 AM Thank you very much, Linda ~

Sara Kendrick November 26, 2022 at 3:15 AM Yes, serene but under the clouds. Congratulations on your winning in Brian's contest. Way to go. Sara Line Gauthier November 26, 2022 at 8:46 AM Much appreciated, Sara ~

Andrea Dietrich November 13, 2022 at 2:40 PM Another cool poem. For which contest was this one? Line Gauthier November 13, 2022 at 3:35 PM Thanks, Andrea.

Becky Forbes November 12, 2022 at 7:02 AM "a blue marble" love it!! AND the title too :-) Line Gauthier November 12, 2022 at 7:07 AM Thanks, I can't take credit for inventing the metaphor unfortunately ~