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If They Could Give Thanks They Would -Triple Ninette, Contest

faint chatter in slight wind rainbow colors flash within sunset graceful soft wings hovering between sips one tiny nectar drop floating downward caught in eye of sun rainbow flashes now grounded colored blank ant drawn near sipping slow from cement cup as others claim stake of sugared drink he blends in darkness falls August 8, 2016 August ninette contest Sponsored by Caren Krutsinger

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Line Gauthier

Date: 8/22/2019 2:28:00 PM

Congrats on your top win, Sandra. Well done.

Sandra Adams
Date: 8/22/2019 3:03:00 PM

Thank you my friend.... hugs :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/19/2019 9:44:00 PM

Congrats on your win in the contest, my friend, with this 'triple-header!' Best wishes, Gershon

Sandra Adams
Date: 8/20/2019 5:29:00 AM

Thank you my friend :) hugs

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 8/17/2019 1:31:00 AM

Wow a triple ninette - awesome imagery my friend -nature at its absolute best and you show your love for it! Best wishes in the contest Sandra, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Sandra Adams
Date: 8/17/2019 7:47:00 AM

Thank you...i love to sit out front at dusk and watch the hummingbirds drink the nectar~ hugs :)

John Gondolf

Date: 8/10/2019 11:39:00 AM

Nicely written string of ninettes, Sandy, good luck in the contest my friend. Hugs, John

Sandra Adams
Date: 8/10/2019 3:44:00 PM

Thank you John :) hugs

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/10/2019 5:50:00 AM

Ahh!! Enjoyed reading your descriptive work. Sara

Sandra Adams
Date: 8/10/2019 3:44:00 PM

Thank you so much Sara, good to see you pop up every now and then :) hugs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/9/2019 8:48:00 PM

what a sweet way to capture nature in this triple ninette, Sandy. You are so cleve.

Sandra Adams
Date: 8/10/2019 3:43:00 PM

Thanks my friend...love watching my hummingbirds before dusk, they share their feeder with ants and now wasps but it's still nice to sit and watch them :) hugs

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/8/2019 9:48:00 PM

You have brought the main course to this banquet Sandra! Just superb! : ) xxoo

Sandra Adams
Date: 8/8/2019 10:58:00 PM

Thank you Connie ... my porch views nightly :) hugs

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/8/2019 4:41:00 PM

I love this...the look, the words and especially the final verse!

Sandra Adams
Date: 8/8/2019 5:57:00 PM

Thank you Kim not sure if it will fit the guidelines of the contest but love it the same :)