James Fraser Poet Rhyme

If They Came?

Up there
Above the blue yonder
Did you ever 
Sit and ponder
 
Are there more
Just like us
Similar race
On their evolution bus
 
If there are 
What like they be
Individuals 
Like you and me
 
If they were, to come tomorrow
Would we glee, would we sorrow
What do you think they would make of us
Would they panic, would we fuss
 
Would they know where we are going
Are human actions, universe showing
Have they come to highlight this
Or are we heading for future bliss
 
What a thrill to meet new life
To iron the creases, banish the strife
Take the world on the evolution bus
Them and us

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Charlene Bird June 10, 2009 at 12:02 PM I believe we would be awfully small minded to think we are the only intelligent life force in this world. Excellent though provoking write James.

Stefania Carmen Misaila June 10, 2009 at 5:36 AM awesome! @-) ps: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TBGynU4yCuU enjoy! love, Stephanie

Carolyn Devonshire June 9, 2009 at 8:18 PM I think they joined our evolutionary bus long ago, James, and together we have been riding for millennia. Remember, Neanderthals and Cro Magnons had no DNA in common. The "missing link" had to come from somewhere else if you believe in evolution. I'm a frequent rider on that bus. Love, carolyn

Brandy Megens June 9, 2009 at 3:03 PM us aganist the world hasn't it always been this way nice piece