Irfana Ali Bhat Poet Personification

If These Walls Could Talk

If these walls could talk
They would have narrated my story
How without you, I live in a constant shock
How I have lost all my  past glory

Witness to my  everlasting misery
My walls would have wailed for me
At least ,they would have made a query
whenever I am lost somewhere in me

Sharing my lonely nights
Seeing me crawl into that cold bed
Knowing all my shivering frights
Crying for me ,as if I am dead

I would  have talked to them about you
About the love we shared
All that ,that happened between me and you
About the life, when we were paired

Living  with this eerie  loneliness
The only noise ,is of a clock
With your hatred creeping into me ,as illness
I wish these walls could talk…..

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Carol Sunshine Brown September 20, 2012 at 12:21 PM Congratulations on your win Irfana. Love, Carol

Cecilia Macfarlane September 19, 2012 at 11:19 AM Congrats Irfana on this compelling write! hugs

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 18, 2012 at 3:28 PM MANY CONGRATS ON YOUR AMAZING WRITE AND WIN LUV .. Irfana Ali Bhat October 12, 2012 at 4:33 AM Thanks Linda

Joyce Johnson September 18, 2012 at 9:55 AM Well done. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce Irfana Ali Bhat October 12, 2012 at 4:32 AM Thanks Joyce

Andrea Dietrich September 17, 2012 at 9:19 PM wow, a very powerful one this is. BIG congrats on your win, Irfana. Irfana Ali Bhat October 12, 2012 at 4:32 AM Thanks Andrea..

Joy Wellington September 17, 2012 at 6:58 PM Congrats Irfana, one love. Joy Wells

Kash Poet September 17, 2012 at 11:42 AM Congrats Irfana on your win in the contest.Loved it! Irfana Ali Bhat September 17, 2012 at 3:09 PM Thanks Kash...:))))

Black Eyed Susan September 17, 2012 at 11:10 AM Congratulations on your #4 win in my contest! I liked how your walls would be a witness to the speaker's decline :) Irfana Ali Bhat September 17, 2012 at 3:09 PM Thanks Susan for placing my entry among the winners.....?xx:)))

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl September 17, 2012 at 10:34 AM Congratulations Irfana on your terrific write and win xx Irfana Ali Bhat September 17, 2012 at 3:07 PM Thanks Mandy...:)))

Poet Destroyer A September 17, 2012 at 10:28 AM IRFANA, congratulations with your wonderful win in Susan's "If These Walls Could Talk..." contest.. have a nice day~ PD Irfana Ali Bhat September 17, 2012 at 3:07 PM Thanks Pd...:))))

Kash Poet September 8, 2012 at 12:21 AM Very good poem by you Irfana.Love this.Best wishes to you. Irfana Ali Bhat September 8, 2012 at 1:27 AM Thanks Kash...:)))