If stars were Gold

Beautiful Inky! I see why it’s on soups best short poems list.

a beautiful flow to your incredible words!

This is one of the best Fibs I've ever read, Inky! A true gem and an instant fave!

Beautiful- it flows like a ballad, and prose, mixed together...in the form of fibonacci. Your work is never common. Loved reading this

In the absence of your cherished one, your psychedelic ink fills my mind with turquoise tears and faltering feathers rising. You sing wonderfully despite the missing.

Such a delight to read this poem and so well written with each chosen syllable count, and great free verse. Your talent is incredible and truly a poetic attempt at poetry.

I gained great insight from this poem. "You'll be the poetic garden that feeds my soul" opens love to a new dimension. It seems to be seen from above. Thank you for this enjoyable Fibonacci.

I love when you do forms that allow for your free verse to have a pattern yet retain their lovely messages like this one. Also I love romance. A fave

Dear Empress, this swept me into a cosmic reverie. You artistically created a dreamscape where emotions intertwine with celestial beauty. It's as if each word danced across the page, leaving traces of magic in its wake. I loved your portrayal of longing and hope showed us of the power of poetry to illuminate even the darkest corners of the soul. Empress your brilliance shined within the world. A marvelous piece! A Fav! - Blessings, Daniel

A new form of poetry for me, Inky. The imagery and the depth of Love you express, both of them flow so smoothly and are very comforting. I like the hope expressed in the last lines. Love and Light my sweet friend. Bill

Very romantic in its own way but also a feeling of loss or absence. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K

Very beautiful, magical write. Romantic. I've dropped many a feather in my life...in fact, not much head-plume left. Oh well, saving on haircuts. -- "remind me, how to sing again, steal the light behind the jade moon?" -- wonderful poetic imagery.

I float in psychedelic ink.. oooo come thru imagery!!! rainbow roses drenched in turquoise tears and metaphors.… mmmm damn papi the kind of romantic weight this piece carries is time stopping aee! if stars were gold, and I am love, you'll be the poetic garden that feeds my soul.!! Ooooo child !! U dangerous love bird!!! This frappachino is freaking heart melting!!! Love the effortless flow !!! Mmmmm u just know how to take my breath away aee u tiger

Melodiously delivered reverie, like an indelible tune lost but never truly forgotten, by grace resurfacing in the debts of despair. Well composed! Robert

Delightfully romantic, Ink: ---But, if stars were gold, and I am love, you'll be the poetic garden that feeds my soul--I hear the sound of missing the beloved--longing for love, resonating throughout through your gifted pen.

IE, this expresses a lot of loneliness to me...and also hope. It does have a psychedelic quality that I can only dream about. Anyone who writes like this must have a golden heart. I am so impressed at how you put your feelings into such beautiful form. The connection to stars, flowers, and other natural phenomena makes this a joy to read. It is hard for me to understand how someone not lonely could write this....I suspect you have amazing ability to feel for others. Hope you have it all!

floating in the sky surrounded by stars I cant think of nicer way to pass some time INK hugs Shadow

I love romantic poems just as much as I do the dark ones. You make me wanna give love a chance. "But, if stars were gold, and I am love, you'll be the poetic garden that feeds my soul." It feels calm and true. A great one dear Ink.

Ahhh..the beautiful vulnerability and breathtaking nostalgia and hope that frames the love in this mesmeric piece is truly captivating! You’ve expressed with such exquisite intricacy of your love and the beauty within, I’m swimming in the imagery and deep sentiments of a true connection and devotion. I don’t even know how you entrance your readers with the words woven within your masterpieces, my beautiful soul sis! This truly brought tears to my eyes! “I float in psychedelic ink..

This is a lovely Fibonacci.. I've never seen one so romantic, this one flows with devotion and love, despite anything that you may face you will always adore and love him.. some lovely line here like, rainbow roses drenched in turquoise tears and metaphors and I like the reference o the poetic garden... we all need a love like this that makes us feel complete and I hope one day you are more than just a faltering feather.. what a coincidence I used feathered fate in my poem today also....

Awwww you’ll be the poetic garden … that line is just so … touching … beautifully inked .