If Only I Could Rewrite the Stars- Christen Kuikoua

If by chance I could relive my life
I will make more mistakes 
will relax and be more sillier
Prasing every second of my life 
than what has been so far in this journey of mine
I would have tolerated more, 
took more chances and face challenges 
Would have travel the world 
and finally, yes, spent more time with my family 
Maybe eating more ice cream and avoiding unnecessary drama
yes! focusing on real troubles
Then having fewer imaginary ones

If only I could do it again 
I will travel lighter and go to more dances
perhaps spending time with nature God's Creation
picking more daisies

You know this life is a mystery
As we tend to grow old, 
we have all our mistakes 
unfolding in front of our own eyes like a movie 
and we are just left with a phrase >
I believe that God didn't create us 
to merely achieve name, fame, and power
For I want to believe there is something deeper
Our standard of life will measure our lives
Never of living conditions


We are not here to just entertain ourselves
with social media and doing robotic routines
To scroll up and down like a Robot
 feeding our mind junk food, 
rotting these marvelous brains the creator gave us.
We literally invented the most powerful tool 
on the face of the earth, 
to spread hatred on twitter and Instagram
literally building the most advanced computer known to man 
and using it only to watch YouTube pranks


So let's change that 
and make it our mission to walk the talk
Because there is a difference between a life well achieved
then a life fill with regrets
Remember, it doesn't matter, 
the amount of money you stored
for as a matter of fact,  
you are not taking it with you on the other side
So live your life to be happy 
to have no regrets and finally to serve God your Creator

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



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