If Only I Could

I think of just how beautiful you are.
Your soul shines forth as if it were a star.
Inside and out, you are so very good.
I’d love to paint you if I only could.

But I don’t think that I could ever find
a hue to match the passion of your mind -
a brilliant red like cardinals in flight
or like the setting sun of summer’s night.

Nor could I paint the blue that you display
in tranquilness with which you face each day.
Your sunny ways of yellow’s many hues -
how could I find the one that I might use?

So many colors shine forth from your soul.
Not one of them could ever show you whole.
The soul of you, so beautiful to me -
I know that it will gleam eternally.

No, I could never paint your lovely glow,
which in my life with you I’ve come to know.
What color could I choose for love so true?
If only I could paint the soul of you.

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Date: 5/2/2023 10:14:00 AM
Congratulations on a well-deserved win! Excellent weave of color and mood.
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Date: 4/28/2023 11:48:00 PM
A grand piece again. Congratulations!
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Date: 4/28/2023 8:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A lovely write. Love It. Have a blessed day/weekend................
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Date: 4/28/2023 4:20:00 AM
Heartiest congratulations on your top win in my contest with this exceptional poem, Andrea:-) Romantic, rich imagery!
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Date: 4/17/2023 3:17:00 AM
Andrea Andrea Andrea. Good Morning. Please take your bow. This is poetry in its entirety starting with your title. Truly. This one entry has beauty emotion love imagery voice and poetic expressions. All poetic elements are attached. This is an entry to be read out loud slowly with emphasis and feeling. It was an honor turning to your page and entry this morning. Have a wonderful day. Blessings always (smile)
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/18/2023 1:08:00 PM
thanks so much. It's one of my personal favorites I wrote this month
Date: 4/16/2023 9:27:00 PM
Enjoyed the myriad of colours you introduce To me here dear...Oh i hope you are being Inspired btw.? Heres wishing you a good day I'm getting rather rhymey, so its bye from me For now..' don't think I'll go that easily.? Cause I won't..' Thats another way of looking at cause And effect btw.'
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Date: 4/16/2023 7:23:00 PM
Andrea, So many fine strokes in this poem, so strong in devotion. I was just talking to my brother about your poems. Now he's a fan too. Happy Sunday in writing... -Richard
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