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If Only I Could

I would harken back to passions of realm sublime As melodies of beloved past endearingly chime Appealing to yesteryears when love was in prime; If only I could endeavor to journey back in time. Strolling with you in springs of blooming meadows We will greet paradise, euphoric thoughts renew, Indulgent in amorous music heartbeats compose; If only I could decode secrets, musings of souls coo. There would be no laments, no recollections irate, Nary a hint of grief, clenching strife would berate, For heavenly bliss in your domain will forever elate; If only I could manage to alter the course of fate. I will restage how dear-Venus inflamed our mood As astral orchestra strummed twinkling stellar tune While courting your fervor waltzing stars wooed; If only I could succeed to entice the doting moon. I remember your smile, lauding blushing twilight, Enamored in lyrics of hearts, fervent verses recite, O, those moonlit desires would rekindle tonight; If only I could seduce, reveries of romantic night. April 16, 2023 This or That, Vol 17 Poetry Contest Sponsor: Edward Ibeh

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Ink Empress

Date: 12/1/2023 1:53:00 AM

What a beautiful and heartfelt write this is dear Vijay, your way with expressing and writing is so very soulful, especially the way you keep your rhyme schemes flowing is impeccable. I found your worpdlay so creative here and evocative. This line especially stood out for me for the very clever alliterations “ strummed twinkling stellar tune” its absolutely gorgeous!!! Ah the twinkling tunes i can hear them through these words. Pleasure always reading you. Never a bad one from your pen. Fave

Bill Baker

Date: 8/10/2023 3:08:00 PM

Your imagery was impeccable, Vijay. It was an eloquently written romantic poem, my friend. Thanks for sharing! Bill

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 6/17/2023 10:45:00 AM

Congratulations Vijay - a brilliant journey back in time. :)

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 5/12/2023 8:11:00 PM

Charming images permeate this poem, graced with sparkle and romance and dancing stars. Congratulations on your win. :)

Joanna Daniel

Date: 5/1/2023 6:09:00 AM

You always score high with your beautiful poems, Vijay, this is one of them, congratulations:)

Christuraj Alex

Date: 4/28/2023 11:53:00 PM

A very beautiful poem, indeed. I enjoy reading your poems. This is one of them. Congratulations!

Valsa George

Date: 4/28/2023 10:10:00 AM

Back to your great poem once again to congratulate you on your well deserved win, dear Vijay

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/28/2023 9:08:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Your "If Only I Could" is a wonderful story/write. I really enjoyed it. Have a blessed day/weekend................

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/28/2023 9:04:00 AM

Hi Vijay, I'm just coming back to congratulate you on a well-deserved win. Have a great day and weekend, my friend:-) Alexis

Edward Ibeh

Date: 4/28/2023 4:26:00 AM

Heartiest congratulations on your top win in my contest with this spectacular poem, Vijay:-) Stunning imagery throughout!

Mike Gentile

Date: 4/26/2023 7:30:00 AM

Vijay, you have beautifully crafted thoughts that so many of us share! Your yearning shines through your romantic verse! happy Wednesday!!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/26/2023 2:44:00 AM

With all its pains and aches, I would never wish to become a youth again. Had too many disappointments.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/23/2023 8:27:00 PM

Your musings are wonderful, Vijay!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/25/2023 5:53:00 AM

Many thanks Kim. Always a joy when you visit.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/23/2023 8:13:00 AM

I love this type of poetry. You did the theme perfectly

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/25/2023 5:53:00 AM

So glad to hear that, Andrea. Much appreciate--many thanks.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 4/23/2023 7:37:00 AM

if only we could live in that luminous moment forever, keep the dove love inside your plush heart for each other, then we'd be happy as Kings and Queens, nice one Vijay, God bless !

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/25/2023 5:52:00 AM

You are very kind. Much appreciate--many thanks, Vienna.

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/21/2023 9:51:00 PM

WoW! Vijay, This is such a romantic at its finest! You write romance ( everything) so well. I echo what Jo said. Best wishes in the contest. Excellent job. Have a great evening and weekend:-) Alexis

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/25/2023 5:52:00 AM

Much appreciate your visit and kind feedback, Alexis. Many thanks my friend.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 4/19/2023 11:40:00 PM

A definite winner, Vijay:) such romantic thoughts, brilliant:)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/20/2023 8:40:00 AM

So nice to hear that. Much appreciate, Jo. Many thanks.

Heidi Sands

Date: 4/19/2023 5:02:00 PM

I love this poem. I can feel the longing and each stanza brings me to a different place, time, thought. Deeply written and far reaching :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/20/2023 8:39:00 AM

Much appreciate your complimentary comments my friend. Many thanks, Heidi.

Joseph May

Date: 4/19/2023 7:45:00 AM

" Lovely memories of a romantic night where "As astral orchestra strummed twinkling stellar tune" Well penned Vijay

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/20/2023 8:38:00 AM

Thank you Joseph--much appreciate.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 4/18/2023 12:29:00 PM

An admirable romantic poem that resonates in every heart that knows love, my dear friend, Vijay. Superb language, inspiring feelings. Excellently done.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/18/2023 3:32:00 PM

Thank you my dear friend. Much appreciate your insights, as always-- and honored by your presence on my page. Many thanks, Demetrios.

Sotto Poet

Date: 4/18/2023 9:27:00 AM

For heavenly bliss in your domain will forever elate; If only I could manage to alter the course of fate. This is another lovely poem featuring the theme of love at its core. Without a doubt, this will place high among the competition. I have no doubt that a large number of people would identify with the yearning and regrets that you have so brilliantly depicted. Good Luck with the contest.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/18/2023 3:33:00 PM

You are always very kind my friend. Much appreciate your insights, Lasaad. Many thanks.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 4/18/2023 6:43:00 AM

Quite a romantic verse Vijay, we should never hold back where love is concerned or we'll have regrets later in life. Greetings from Rhodes, here for our 45th anniversary. Good luck in the contest. Tom

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/18/2023 8:28:00 AM

BIG congrats, Tom, on your 45th. You chose a lovely place to celebrate. Many thanks for taking the time to comment. Much appreciate, as always.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 4/18/2023 6:19:00 AM

Vijay, you have vividly and movingly descibed the kind of longing, regrets, that I'm sure many feel. Janice

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/18/2023 8:26:00 AM

Many thanks Janice. Much appreciate your kind remarks, as always.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/17/2023 2:03:00 AM

- A wonderful poem, Vijay ... a pleasure to read these beautiful lines :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/17/2023 2:18:00 PM

So glad you liked the poem, Anne-Lise. Much appreciate your kind remarks. Many thanks.

Valsa George

Date: 4/16/2023 9:20:00 PM

Love this rhyming poem written in your inimitable style using choicest words.... dear Vijay. Another beautiful poem celebrating love. I am sure this will be placed high in the contest. All the Best.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/17/2023 2:17:00 PM

Glad to hear that my friend. Much appreciate your visit and comments, as always, Valsa. Many thanks.