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Maxims for eyes, a cast of racing clouds, and a sky What else could be wrapped in lexical display? Climate crises, inflation, and dire behest worry me Pale-blue slicing of an idle cul-de-sac and apathy Seldom do I feel as if I need to fix the world I turn gray faster as the paving light is pearled If I break the law, will my anxiety fade away? It's ironic, as it's always within me and may sway. If your life is a wide ocean and you are a sailor even though it appeared to be a failure The mind exchanges stupidity for money If you lack zeal for goals, you will lose many. Trusting someone too quickly is perilous Men grow strangers as they're querulous Be a dreamer, not the warlord of your life Anger at its pinnacle sharpened as a knife. Even stillness is noise in times of despair It is wiser to endure the hostility we wear Words are razor-sharp and may easily sever Ponder twice once you decide to act together. After discovering the truth, the gaze shrinks Just appear radical as the bustling bosom sinks Events, such as weather, can be both cold or warm If luck fades, genuine tasks last long and swarm. Hysterical attacks, scary fists, smacking hands skill-building duties to flush us into the strands We scoffed at fresh skills, saying he was done A priori, I would have reacted if we had begun. The starry rhythms of this vast, deep night Moon moves within, the same as a ball of plight Its molten silver moans assaulted my mind Unspoken thoughts throb. I adjust my bind. Taste the heft of silence ink as it ties our bond Consider me to only be your miraculous wand Could the stars be counted if only I knew how! may emerge as bright as the sun on an icy brow. Deeds are scrutinized, so retain the token Life continues whenever hopes are broken If one's spirit is disturbed, it produces pain If all else fails, simply trust in God once again. Once low tide falls, pearls are seen on the beach If money can buy gold, ethics are still within reach Patience is the antidote to a successful lifestyle None lasts, it all ends; it's your turn to cry for a while. Both the flavor and aroma of life are sublime Humor is aesthetic; worrying is detritus time Love is the same as water; mixes color and caste Lift your spirit, your skin will turn clay at last.
Written: March 28, 2023 This Or That, Vol 17 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh

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Date: 4/28/2023 3:56:00 AM
Oh no, it's rather unfortunate you forgot to submit this absolute masterpiece, Lasaad. I would've placed it at the very top! It's an instant fave.
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Date: 4/28/2023 10:48:00 AM
Yes, Edward, it is regrettable; this is the second time that I have forgotten to submit my poem, and I sincerely hope that it will not happen again. I appreciate your care.
Date: 3/30/2023 11:18:00 AM
- This must be Pandora's box filled with wisdom and thoughts, Las - A wonderful poem...hope it will be at the top of the winners list...good luck :) - hugs
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Date: 3/29/2023 8:14:00 PM
Your poem contains such time tested wonderful lines. Let me quote a few which impressed me most..... "Trusting someone too quickly is perilous/ Men grow strangers as they're querulous/ Be a dreamer, not the warlord of your life." I learn this everyday. "Even stillness is noise in times of despair/ It is wiser to endure the hostility we wear/ Words are razor-sharp and may easily sever"..... Wonderful poem from which much wisdom can be gleaned. All the Best, dear friend!
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Date: 3/29/2023 9:45:00 AM
A profound analytical thesis with a plethora of ideas and advice that puzzle the mind, my dear friend, Lasaad. A powerful and wonderful poem. Blessings.
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Date: 3/29/2023 5:58:00 AM
Words of potent advice sprinkled throughout my friend. You devoted lot of energy in this exploration of life.
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