If Only I Could

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I would, if I could, plant a seed A spark of joy that love may lead But cold hearts sing not in chorus Whispers of soul, they're yet to heed How may I make your heart porous Peering through the eye of Horus I see your soul, as yet asleep Dormant still, is your heart’s torus I would, if I could, take the leap Enter your subconscious mind deep That our hearts be not asunder Bliss in permanence, ours to keep Head over heart, a big blunder Insentient to bliss thunder Humming within by day and night Rapture unbound, divine wonder I would, if I could, use God's might To set between us, all things right But for now, methinks I must wait Till you garner spherical sight 28-March-2023 ____________ This or That, Vol 17 Poetry Contest Sponsor: Edward Ibeh

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/28/2023 9:15:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A lovely write/picture. Have a blessed day/weekend................

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 4/28/2023 2:35:00 PM

Thank you dear Paula

Edward Ibeh

Date: 4/28/2023 9:12:00 AM

Heartiest congratulations on your win with this amazing poem, Seeker:-) Bravo!

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 4/28/2023 2:34:00 PM

Happy you liked it dear Edward! Thanks for hosting such an innovative contest.

Valsa George

Date: 3/29/2023 2:54:00 AM

Wonderful thoughts, dear Seeker friend ! I am sure this will fetch for you a distinguished placement. All the Best!

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 3/29/2023 4:14:00 AM

Can’t say ~ Edward sets a high benchmark. I’m happy with the poem, you’re happy with it, that’s what counts!

Joanna Daniel

Date: 3/28/2023 1:59:00 AM

Well done, US:)

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 3/28/2023 2:19:00 AM

Thank you, Joanna