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If Only

If only I could find someone like him, that I would fall head over heals in love with, and want to spend the rest of my life with. If only I could be in his arms longer, where I know I would feel safe and secure, and to know that I would be okay. If only I could lay next to him longer, with my head resting upon his chest, just listening to his heart race like mine. If only I could look into his soft eyes, just to watch them glow in the candle light, as they sparkle just like mine would. If only I could kiss his soft and tender lips, and just think to myself I was right, that his kisses are just perfect. If only I could hear him say I love you, and make me go weak in the knees and cry, as I would look at him and whisper, if only it wasn't just a dream.

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Date: 6/14/2012 12:38:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Gail's "Remembering A Lost Love" contest Rachel. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/13/2012 9:30:00 PM
RACHEL , congratulations in Gail's heartfelt contest ;-) Good night*PD
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Date: 6/13/2012 6:16:00 AM
Rachel, congrats on your win with this lovely write! I enjoyed reading. Love and Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 6/12/2012 8:44:00 PM
I love this one. I think we women think this way at one time or another in the course of our lifetime. Very nice. And congrats on your win.
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Date: 6/12/2012 5:02:00 PM
Thank you very much! I take pride in everything I write and I am very pleased that you all like my work! I am wondering though what win are you talking about?
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Date: 6/12/2012 3:09:00 PM
Very moving ... Congrats on your win... Terry
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Date: 6/12/2012 11:48:00 AM
Very touching write here by you Rachel.Congrats on your win.
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Date: 6/12/2012 2:37:00 AM
Rachel congrats on your win..David
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Date: 8/10/2010 5:31:00 AM
Another day of fasinating reading ahead of me I see. Thank you for sharing your poetry with us Rachel. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/9/2010 5:25:00 PM
If only Rachel, enjoyed your poem,, p.d.
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