If, My Darling

If, My Darling, you are the last to turn out the light please kiss my memory as you leave.  Rearrange my hat and keys, pull hard if the door still sticks.  I know.  I never got around to it.  Remember always, the Tuesday Ring and our scheduled “Honey Days”.  Are the roses in bloom?   Don’t worry about the “check engine” light.  I checked – it’s still there.  So many things left undone, unsaid.  There was never enough time – for us.  Yet we spent an eternity together and it was too short.  I shall walk slowly ahead so take your time and always remember ours.


eternity loves forever deception scents lingering ©7/28/2018 for – For your Poetry Journal Poetry Contest sponsor – Dear Heart a.k.a. Broken Wings

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Date: 8/9/2018 2:33:00 PM
John congratulations on your win in my contest with this beautifully penned piece ~
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Date: 8/9/2018 10:01:00 AM
Poignant!
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Date: 8/8/2018 7:26:00 PM
This is touching and compelling... a glimpse into the love of a lifetime. Congratulations on your #1 win. A fave.
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Date: 8/8/2018 4:55:00 PM
Such a moving haibun John many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/7/2018 6:38:00 AM
Let me pick my jaw up off the floor, this is that good. Gorgeous well earned first place John, congratulations! xomo
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John Lawless
Date: 8/7/2018 7:08:00 AM
Thank you so much for that magnificent comment.
Date: 8/7/2018 6:26:00 AM
How wonderful to see this in First Place John. Congratulations on your wonderful win! : )
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John Lawless
Date: 8/7/2018 7:02:00 AM
thanks again Connie...
Date: 8/7/2018 1:36:00 AM
So lovely, sad and true.
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John Lawless
Date: 8/7/2018 7:02:00 AM
Some truth in our thoughts as we grow older. Thanks for stopping to read and comment Virginia.
Date: 7/29/2018 8:26:00 PM
A lovely moving haibun for the contest John. Well written! Best of luck for the contest. : )
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John Lawless
Date: 7/30/2018 2:35:00 PM
Thanks Connie, there is a bit of truth between these lines.
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