If, My Darling

If, My Darling, you are the last to turn out the light please kiss my memory as you leave.  Rearrange my hat and keys, pull hard if the door still sticks.  I know.  I never got around to it.  Remember always, the Tuesday Ring and our scheduled “Honey Days”.  Are the roses in bloom?   Don’t worry about the “check engine” light.  I checked – it’s still there.  So many things left undone, unsaid.  There was never enough time – for us.  Yet we spent an eternity together and it was too short.  I shall walk slowly ahead so take your time and always remember ours.


eternity loves forever deception scents lingering ©7/28/2018 for – For your Poetry Journal Poetry Contest sponsor – Dear Heart a.k.a. Broken Wings
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La France Avatar
August 9, 2018 at 2:33 PM
John congratulations on your win in my contest with this beautifully penned piece ~
Mandani Avatar
August 9, 2018 at 10:01 AM
Poignant!
Gentry Avatar
August 8, 2018 at 7:26 PM
This is touching and compelling... a glimpse into the love of a lifetime. Congratulations on your #1 win. A fave.
Allison Avatar
August 8, 2018 at 4:55 PM
Such a moving haibun John many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 7, 2018 at 6:38 AM
Let me pick my jaw up off the floor, this is that good. Gorgeous well earned first place John, congratulations! xomo
Lawless Avatar
August 7, 2018 at 7:08 AM
Thank you so much for that magnificent comment.
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 7, 2018 at 6:26 AM
How wonderful to see this in First Place John. Congratulations on your wonderful win! : )
Lawless Avatar
August 7, 2018 at 7:02 AM
thanks again Connie...
Waters Avatar
August 7, 2018 at 1:36 AM
So lovely, sad and true.
Lawless Avatar
August 7, 2018 at 7:02 AM
Some truth in our thoughts as we grow older. Thanks for stopping to read and comment Virginia.
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 29, 2018 at 8:26 PM
A lovely moving haibun for the contest John. Well written! Best of luck for the contest. : )
Lawless Avatar
July 30, 2018 at 2:35 PM
Thanks Connie, there is a bit of truth between these lines.
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