If Love Delays Any Longer

If love delays any longer,
and I make up exscuses
to commit myself and settle down,
this name will not be carried on.
Gray, brittle hair to a hide a face of shame;
hands with brown spots to show my age...
face drowned in worries...that I could have prevented.


Feeling death before it comes,
makes every tomorrow bleak,
days will be lived without scope,
just living them as they had no meaning,
fearfully waiting for darkness to come...
and cuddle up in a blanked that hides moonlight;
no kisses tasting like petals of roses to leave their sweetness.
 

If love delays any longer,
I'll have no one to embrace,
to tell my feelings with trust;
anything I will do will be worthless.
Built castles will tumble down and disappear
in an ocean that has seen only tragedies;
tears and screams will avail to nothing, I'll be a forgotten being.


Staring through a rain-pelted window, 
couples rush to get inside and watch it
with delightful eyes to appreciate and admire
what Heaven sends down for an abundant season...
with cries of babies being born from wombs
of young mothers, who thank their Creator with prayers;
my last wish is that some will also be mine and call me father.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 4/8/2011 4:29:00 AM
Heart-wrenching rendering of yearning, Andrew. Many congrat's on your BIG WIN. Lainie
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Date: 4/7/2011 9:04:00 AM
Congratulations Andrew on your honored success. Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/6/2011 11:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Drake's contest Andrew. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/6/2011 10:07:00 AM
I have children, if I could not have had any I would have missed so much, I hope there are children in your future Andrew, for those that wish it, it is the greatest blessing in their lives, congrats on your win in the contest
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Date: 4/6/2011 8:32:00 AM
Having no children, I can really relate to the sad thoughts in your poem, Andrew. It is too late for me now, but perhaps your wish will still come true. I hope so! Congratulations on your success in Drake's contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/6/2011 5:52:00 AM
Congratulations on the HM win in the contest of Drake, Andrew
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Date: 4/6/2011 5:08:00 AM
Congrats Andrew on your HM in Drake's cool contest with this magnificent write and excellent entry my friend.. a joy to read.. enjoy your very special honor with luv..
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Date: 4/6/2011 5:06:00 AM
I understand this all too well. A great poem, Andrew!
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Date: 3/9/2011 12:25:00 AM
You make it sound so real, but I am sure you are loved already, Andrew!
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Date: 3/7/2011 10:06:00 PM
aging, lost, loneliness, and then in the end to feel love of one's own children, very good enjoyed reading.
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