If I Wrote My Poem For You

To be sung to the Beatles Tune: "If I Fell In Love With You" https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4yjUuX-I0QE ~ IF I WROTE A POEM FOR YOU ~ If I wrote my poem for you, would you promise not to choose another poet's rhyme? 'Cause you have so much to judge, and to save yourself the drudge by just choosing mine! If I wrote free verse for you I must be sure, from the very first that you will love it more than theirs! If I trust in you......oh please Don't ridicule.. If I edit words...oh please...don't say haiku to me! "Cause I couldn't stand the shame And I...could try again, and change my poem ..to a quatrain! So I hope you know That I ...would struggle hard to change my prose Tho some might cry when they learn what I've proposed But they'd have to bear the pain And I ...will be sad if my new poem is in vain So I hope you know I'll stoop quite low to bribe you Or else, I'll sob and cry, "Oh No! boo hoo!!!" ......If I wrote this poem for you
------------------------------------------------------------------------------ For Beatles Contest Sponsored by John Heck 2010
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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October 17, 2015 at 9:33 PM
This is wonderful Carrie! Congrats on your win!
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October 15, 2015 at 11:51 AM
Carrie, congrats on the win, LINDA
Callus Avatar
October 14, 2015 at 3:19 PM
This is an excellent bribe poem/song, Carrie! It appeals a lot to me. Maybe one day you'll write a poem for me:) ~ Congratulations!! // paul
A. Sharma Avatar
October 12, 2015 at 11:25 PM
Awesome write n win Carrie! Big congrats!
Haight Avatar
October 12, 2015 at 9:28 PM
Super job, Carrie, written to be sung to that tune! Love it! Congratulations on your win. Hugs, Sandra
Allison Avatar
October 12, 2015 at 2:43 PM
what a fun write Carrie congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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October 12, 2015 at 2:40 PM
WOW, Carrie, mighty clever. If this was my contest, I sure would have placed you high. This is still a wonderful win. Congratulations on your awesome poem. SKAT
Nance Avatar
October 12, 2015 at 2:37 PM
This was fun to read, Thanks for entering!
Mckenzie Avatar
February 19, 2010 at 4:03 PM
Carrie~ Congratulations on your first place win in John's contest! Laura :0)
Freeman Avatar
February 18, 2010 at 9:54 AM
Awesome poem for first place win, Carrie. "CONGRATULATIONS" Sincere, Agape, Moses
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February 16, 2010 at 9:27 AM
Congratulations Carrie, You did it very well! Your BEATLEMANIA SING-ALONG poem is among the winners, First place, in the contest Sponsored by: John Heck! I can hear the tune playing and you did at great job with the flow. I can see you must have bribed him...with your good humor! What a fun write this one is. You deserve the win. SMILES… Dane Ann
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February 16, 2010 at 8:18 AM
You should definitely sell copies of this, could be in the Top Ten. I simply love it, you penned an excelent verse. Congratulations on the first place win, well deserved. Caryl
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February 16, 2010 at 2:46 AM
I liked this poem in the melody of "If I Fell". You are so talented on this verse, Carrie. My congratulations on you winning first place. (^_^) Noel.
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 13, 2010 at 3:54 AM
Super win with a really fun poem! Congratulations Carrie. Glad I didn't miss it. Aloha, Connie
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February 11, 2010 at 2:57 PM
Carrie, many congratulations on your success in John's fine contest >> James
Haick Avatar
February 8, 2010 at 2:08 PM
Congratulations, dear Carrie on your splendid win in John's contest! Great job! Peace and love, Audrey
Brown Avatar
February 8, 2010 at 11:15 AM
Congratulations on your win in John's contest Carrie. Love, Carol
Kelly Avatar
February 7, 2010 at 11:30 AM
Congrats , Carrie . Well deserved on your most inventive entry ....
Strand Avatar
February 7, 2010 at 12:53 AM
Congrats on your success in John's contest Carrie.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments and Kind words.
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February 6, 2010 at 8:10 PM
Oh, Carrie, this is indeed sensational. Well deserved. Congrats on your win. Best wishes, Caroline.
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February 6, 2010 at 4:38 PM
Congratulations on your win! Brava!
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February 6, 2010 at 4:30 PM
Congratulations, loved this one, ...Margaret
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February 6, 2010 at 12:44 PM
Congrats Carrie on your first place win in the Beatlemania contest... kudos to u for a great write.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
Winter Avatar
February 6, 2010 at 12:08 PM
LOL You are so awesome!! Well deserved congrats Carrie!!! xoxoxo
Stella Avatar
February 6, 2010 at 11:29 AM
not even sure if john seen mine hey dude hmmmmmmmmmmmmmm oh well congrats all
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