Linda Alice Fowler Poet Rhyme

If I Were Your Love

If I were your love and you, mine,
I would ask Earth to steady your way 
and provide smooth race to the last line
with a paved path so you won’t stray.

If I were your love and you, mine,
I would ask Wind to sing a song
of love and ardor so sweet and fine,
you would agree that we belong.

If I were your love and you, mine,
I would ask Fire to spur you on
encouraging your passions to align,
and lay your fervor to bear upon.

If I were your love and you, mine,
I would ask Water to cool your brow
with soothing sounds In rhythmic time
and troublesome worries to disallow.

If I were your love and you, mine,
I could dream a life of grandeur sublime.

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Ann Peck May 3, 2023 at 4:04 PM That is a beautiful poem, Linda. Earth, Wind and Fire and Water. All lovely, but "I would ask Earth to steady your way, and provide smooth race to the last line..." I really love those lines. Congratulations! Linda Alice Fowler May 3, 2023 at 7:53 PM You are too kind Ann. Thank you for your sweet words about this write. I am pleased you enjoyed it. :)

Malabika Ray Choudhury May 3, 2023 at 4:55 AM Congratulations on your win, Linda. A fabulous, touching poem - thoroughly enjoyed. Love ~ Mala Linda Alice Fowler May 3, 2023 at 7:13 AM Thank you dear Mala. I appreciate your sweet comments. :)

Joanna Daniel May 2, 2023 at 11:30 PM Aha! You scored with this beauty, Linda! Congratulations! Linda Alice Fowler May 3, 2023 at 7:12 AM Many thanks friend Jo. I appreciate your continued support! :)

Joanna Daniel April 27, 2023 at 6:59 AM Sublime poetry, Linda, a winner in my eyes:) I never seem to write anything that pleases her, so I will not participate this time in her contest... Linda Alice Fowler April 27, 2023 at 7:26 AM Thank you Jo. My poems don't seen to resonate either, but I liked the title and am persistent! LOL

Regina Mcintosh April 27, 2023 at 12:52 AM Love it! God bless you sweet lady. Love, Gina Linda Alice Fowler April 27, 2023 at 6:20 AM Good morning Gina. Thank you! :)

Daniel Turner April 26, 2023 at 5:16 PM I really like this one, Alice. Reads like a winner to me:) Linda Alice Fowler April 26, 2023 at 6:33 PM Many thanks dear Daniel. I'm glad you like this :)