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If I Were Your Love

If I were your love and you, mine,
I would ask Earth to steady your way 
and provide smooth race to the last line
with a paved path so you won’t stray.

If I were your love and you, mine,
I would ask Wind to sing a song
of love and ardor so sweet and fine,
you would agree that we belong.

If I were your love and you, mine,
I would ask Fire to spur you on
encouraging your passions to align,
and lay your fervor to bear upon.

If I were your love and you, mine,
I would ask Water to cool your brow
with soothing sounds In rhythmic time
and troublesome worries to disallow.

If I were your love and you, mine,
I could dream a life of grandeur sublime.

Copyright © Linda Alice Fowler | Year Posted 2023

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Ann Peck Date: 5/3/2023 4:04:00 PM That is a beautiful poem, Linda. Earth, Wind and Fire and Water. All lovely, but "I would ask Earth to steady your way, and provide smooth race to the last line..." I really love those lines. Congratulations! Login to Reply Linda Alice Fowler Date: 5/3/2023 7:53:00 PM You are too kind Ann. Thank you for your sweet words about this write. I am pleased you enjoyed it. :)

Malabika Ray Choudhury Date: 5/3/2023 4:55:00 AM Congratulations on your win, Linda. A fabulous, touching poem - thoroughly enjoyed. Love ~ Mala Login to Reply Linda Alice Fowler Date: 5/3/2023 7:13:00 AM Thank you dear Mala. I appreciate your sweet comments. :)

Joanna Daniel Date: 5/2/2023 11:30:00 PM Aha! You scored with this beauty, Linda! Congratulations! Login to Reply Linda Alice Fowler Date: 5/3/2023 7:12:00 AM Many thanks friend Jo. I appreciate your continued support! :)

Joanna Daniel Date: 4/27/2023 6:59:00 AM Sublime poetry, Linda, a winner in my eyes:) I never seem to write anything that pleases her, so I will not participate this time in her contest... Login to Reply Linda Alice Fowler Date: 4/27/2023 7:26:00 AM Thank you Jo. My poems don't seen to resonate either, but I liked the title and am persistent! LOL

Regina Mcintosh Date: 4/27/2023 12:52:00 AM Love it! God bless you sweet lady. Love, Gina Login to Reply Linda Alice Fowler Date: 4/27/2023 6:20:00 AM Good morning Gina. Thank you! :)

Daniel Turner Date: 4/26/2023 5:16:00 PM I really like this one, Alice. Reads like a winner to me:) Login to Reply Linda Alice Fowler Date: 4/26/2023 6:33:00 PM Many thanks dear Daniel. I'm glad you like this :)