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If I Were Your Love

If I were your love and you, mine, I would ask Earth to steady your way and provide smooth race to the last line with a paved path so you won’t stray. If I were your love and you, mine, I would ask Wind to sing a song of love and ardor so sweet and fine, you would agree that we belong. If I were your love and you, mine, I would ask Fire to spur you on encouraging your passions to align, and lay your fervor to bear upon. If I were your love and you, mine, I would ask Water to cool your brow with soothing sounds In rhythmic time and troublesome worries to disallow. If I were your love and you, mine, I could dream a life of grandeur sublime.

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Date: 5/3/2023 4:04:00 PM
That is a beautiful poem, Linda. Earth, Wind and Fire and Water. All lovely, but "I would ask Earth to steady your way, and provide smooth race to the last line..." I really love those lines. Congratulations!
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 5/3/2023 7:53:00 PM
You are too kind Ann. Thank you for your sweet words about this write. I am pleased you enjoyed it. :)
Date: 5/3/2023 4:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Linda. A fabulous, touching poem - thoroughly enjoyed. Love ~ Mala
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 5/3/2023 7:13:00 AM
Thank you dear Mala. I appreciate your sweet comments. :)
Date: 5/2/2023 11:30:00 PM
Aha! You scored with this beauty, Linda! Congratulations!
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 5/3/2023 7:12:00 AM
Many thanks friend Jo. I appreciate your continued support! :)
Date: 4/27/2023 6:59:00 AM
Sublime poetry, Linda, a winner in my eyes:) I never seem to write anything that pleases her, so I will not participate this time in her contest...
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 4/27/2023 7:26:00 AM
Thank you Jo. My poems don't seen to resonate either, but I liked the title and am persistent! LOL
Date: 4/27/2023 12:52:00 AM
Love it! God bless you sweet lady. Love, Gina
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 4/27/2023 6:20:00 AM
Good morning Gina. Thank you! :)
Date: 4/26/2023 5:16:00 PM
I really like this one, Alice. Reads like a winner to me:)
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 4/26/2023 6:33:00 PM
Many thanks dear Daniel. I'm glad you like this :)

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