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If I Were Your Love

 
"If I were your love: You would be my everything; my soul and my heart; my today and my tomorrows; and my forever." Quote by _Constance If I were your love you would be loved, our love story would be one worth writing about; and forever you will be beloved. I would never, ever give a reason of doubt; proclaiming it to God and Heaven- I would shout ! Darling, when you feel sad I will hold you, when discouraged then my arms will be your power; and better tomorrows you will pursue. And we will stand up tall like a mighty tower; when we make love your sweet kisses- I will devour ! In a love dance we would visit the stars, and like drifting feathers we would come floating down; I promise you that this love could be ours. Home a grand palace even if in shantytown; and one day my dream will be- to wear a white gown ! So, lover will you take a chance with me, join me on this sweet journey and exploration: to put roots deep down like a forest tree. If we were lovers it will be the creation; and respect, love, friendship- will be the foundation ! And I would write epic poems about us like Calliope ! _____________________ April 22, 2023 Poetry/Rhyme/If I Were Your Love Copyright Protected, ID 04-1542-098-22 All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France Written for the Premiere contest, If I Were Your Love sponsor, Mystic Rose Rose, Judged 0f/02/2023
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Date: 4/28/2023 2:05:00 PM
This is such a beautiful, romantic poem Constance. I always love your expressive choice of words.Such emotive writing but so very clever too. I am taking inspiration from you which is encouraging me to be more creative and improve my humble writings. So thank you and warmest wishes.
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Constance La France
Date: 4/29/2023 5:46:00 PM
Christina, thank you so much for the compliment on my poem and my writing and the lovely comment !
Date: 4/25/2023 3:25:00 AM
Very touching, Constance with a great quote:)
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Constance La France
Date: 4/25/2023 11:05:00 AM
Jo, thank you so much for the compliment on my poem and quote !
Date: 4/23/2023 8:02:00 AM
This is beautiful, and your quotes always enhance your poetry, Dear heart.
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Constance La France
Date: 4/23/2023 9:36:00 AM
Andrea, thank you so much for the compliment on my poem and quote !
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