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If I Were Your Love

Would you love me more than
the stars in the azure sky?

And hold me tight if your arms
don’t wrap around my waist?

Would you love me when I fall
short as time goes by?

Or when our lives slow down and
not so fast-paced?

Would you love me if I start to
forget your handsome face?

The memory of us is fading fast
I have to focus really hard on who
you are.

I can’t do this much longer, I love
you beyond time and space.

Please don’t forget, when I see you
again, I might not know who you are 
my all-star.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 5/3/2023 7:06:00 AM
A touching write Alexis. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 5/3/2023 4:45:00 AM
Congratulations, Alexis, on your win. A wonderful touching, poignant poem! Hugs, My Friend.
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Date: 5/2/2023 11:30:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Alexis:)
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Date: 4/23/2023 4:24:00 AM
Sad and wonderful at the same time, Alexis:)
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Date: 4/22/2023 6:59:00 PM
Moments fade and it becomes difficult to remember certain things, as we age. Your thoughts tug at my heart. This is both, beautiful and emotional, all at the same time. My best to you, Alexis. Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 4/22/2023 5:29:00 AM
Wonderfully depictive of the dialogue of love. Your pen evokes the feelings posed by kindred hearts. So well written, Alexis.
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Date: 4/22/2023 2:06:00 AM
The numberless questions thrown on the face by one who is eager to splash in the love of her beloved.
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Date: 4/22/2023 12:52:00 AM
Love can be a tricky affair. Easy to lose.
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Date: 4/21/2023 3:54:00 PM
This is sad yes but lovely too Alexis, it happens when memory fades and it’s hard to remember faces and night from days… Belle
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Date: 4/21/2023 3:13:00 PM
Both sad and beautiful. It pulls at the heartstrings. Take care, Shirley
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Date: 4/21/2023 12:33:00 PM
- A wonderful poem, Alexis :) - hugs
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