Emma Mantle Poet Tanka

If I Were Upside Down

Lying in the dark
     looking up to velvet sky
           star studded endless
                      if ground became the ceiling 
                                                   imagine if I now fell.

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Sara Kendrick February 20, 2011 at 4:51 PM Very descriptive and expressive work..I am glad that I chose this one to read this eve..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara

Debbie Guzzi February 20, 2011 at 1:07 PM thanks for the entry, read the blog on tanka, first three lines okie dookie, use line one as the title ---lying in the dark/ remember a tanka was a reply to a lovers haiku ;) Light & Love

Robert Pettit February 20, 2011 at 8:43 AM Looks like a good entry for Deb's contest. Short but very sweet descriptively.

Michael J. Falotico February 20, 2011 at 7:26 AM Cool constructed write.. I have enjoyed your poetry this morning......Michael