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If I Were Upside Down

Lying in the dark looking up to velvet sky star studded endless if ground became the ceiling imagine if I now fell.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/20/2011 4:51:00 PM
Very descriptive and expressive work..I am glad that I chose this one to read this eve..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
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Date: 2/20/2011 1:07:00 PM
thanks for the entry, read the blog on tanka, first three lines okie dookie, use line one as the title ---lying in the dark/ remember a tanka was a reply to a lovers haiku ;) Light & Love
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Date: 2/20/2011 8:43:00 AM
Looks like a good entry for Deb's contest. Short but very sweet descriptively.
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Date: 2/20/2011 7:26:00 AM
Cool constructed write.. I have enjoyed your poetry this morning......Michael
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