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If I Were To Work a Miracle

If I were to work a miracle I know what it would be In selfish quest I'd ask to grow in someone's company Then we could prosper sharing precious moments in life If I could have the same children, I'd pray she would be my wife I would treasure the ground she walks on, in joyous harmony For before I requested this miracle, she opened my eyes to see Many things we share, architecture and music are two There's history and geography, she says binds me and you But it's the music that cements us, especially with Queen If I were to work a miracle, then this would be my dream

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/3/2012 5:36:00 AM
I happened cross a comment you made to a dear poet friend of mine and you quoted this and another poem...soon to be read; and it was like finding a treasure for me ! Into mine favz with this sir ! Happy New Year to you and those you love sir ! Much love, james
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Date: 12/27/2011 9:43:00 AM
I have a feeling your dream is a reality James; you have a way with words that always tells a great story.
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Date: 12/14/2011 8:06:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest. I see your work was fully deserving of being chosen among the winners.
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Date: 12/14/2011 3:34:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your winning work..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 12/14/2011 9:52:00 AM
Well said James, and a worthy desire. Congrats on your worthy win. Agape, Moses
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Date: 12/13/2011 6:33:00 PM
Such a lovely dream, ....romantic and tender is this! Congratulations, dear James, and Happy Holidays to you and your loved ones! Thank you for your years of kind comments! Merry Christmas!
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Date: 12/13/2011 4:44:00 PM
Very lovely poem James..Congratulations on a well-deserved win! Love, Annalise
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Date: 12/13/2011 11:49:00 AM
Nice poem here James.Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 12/13/2011 11:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your wondrous miracle and win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 12/13/2011 10:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your super placement in the "Your Christmas Miracle" contest James. Love and blessings always, Carol
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Date: 12/13/2011 10:15:00 AM
Congratulations James i hope this works for you x
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Date: 12/13/2011 9:52:00 AM
James, I also long to "grow in someone's company" and I hope the miracle you requested comes true. Finding someone with whom you have so much in common is rare. Congratulations on your second-place win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/8/2011 11:50:00 PM
a wonderful dream, JAmes!!
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Date: 12/8/2011 7:40:00 AM
Lovely poem on working a miracle. So Queen would cement you two. Has me smiling today. love phyl
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Date: 12/7/2011 3:57:00 PM
Great flowing piece James, liked it overall.) Also did you get the soup mail i sent..?
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Date: 12/5/2011 8:11:00 PM
You go James, WORK THAT MIRACLE...this is what poetry is ALLLL ABOUT!! Makes me feel like a youngin' again! I like the way you want to share all your heart's desires like architecture and music....details...it's all in the details.... Best to you, Gwendolen
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