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If I Were To Love

If I were to love (just saying, for I am old now and much of the heat dissipated) but--if, just saying-- that Classic love of body and soul, it would be with someone like you: Not the eyes of stars nor breasts like moons sweat down of maternity but the dearness of Christ and His angels, such feelings that made Him God and gave all he raised up wings and heavens to soar. So, if I love, just saying indeed I love just praying and even more again vowing but this time not till death do us part but with truer divinity far exceeding the learning heart….

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Date: 5/26/2018 2:27:00 PM
Delightfully written. Fun with wisdom.
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Joe Dimino
Date: 5/27/2018 10:53:00 AM
Hi Brian; thank you again. Your positive feedback means a lot to me. Blessings my friend!
Date: 5/14/2018 9:33:00 AM
Simply beautiful especially the last three lines...blessed be.
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Joe Dimino
Date: 5/14/2018 11:54:00 AM
Thank you, Moon; have a beautiful day!!
Date: 5/10/2018 1:23:00 PM
Your poem is so original in content. That kind of love is the best kind of love. Thanks for sharing, I have enjoyed your poem today .
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Joe Dimino
Date: 5/10/2018 6:41:00 PM
Thank you, Pixie; have a beautiful day!
Date: 5/6/2018 8:28:00 PM
That was beautiful and so true,, :)
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Joe Dimino
Date: 5/7/2018 4:30:00 PM
Thank you, Jackie; this means a lot to me. Have a beautiful day my friend!
Date: 5/6/2018 7:48:00 AM
Excellent. Well penned. Thanks for sharing it.
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Joe Dimino
Date: 5/7/2018 4:29:00 PM
Thank you so much! Blessings Ravi!
Date: 5/5/2018 2:27:00 PM
Very nicely written Joe :)
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Joe Dimino
Date: 5/5/2018 7:34:00 PM
Thank you very much, Heidi; greatly appreciate the encouragement. Have a beautiful day!

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