If I Were To Love

If I were to love (just saying,
for I am old now
and much of the heat dissipated)
but--if, just saying--
that Classic love
of body and soul,
it would be 
with someone like you:
Not the eyes of stars
nor breasts like moons
sweat down of maternity
but the dearness of Christ
and His angels,
such feelings that made Him God
and gave all he raised up 
wings and heavens to soar. 

So, if I love, just saying
indeed I love
just praying
and even more
again vowing
but this time
not till death do us part
but with truer divinity
far exceeding
the learning heart….
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Densham Avatar
May 26, 2018 at 2:27 PM
Delightfully written. Fun with wisdom.
DiMino Avatar
May 27, 2018 at 10:53 AM
Hi Brian; thank you again. Your positive feedback means a lot to me. Blessings my friend!
Flower Avatar
May 14, 2018 at 9:33 AM
Simply beautiful especially the last three lines...blessed be.
DiMino Avatar
May 14, 2018 at 11:54 AM
Thank you, Moon; have a beautiful day!!
Rose  Avatar
May 10, 2018 at 1:23 PM
Your poem is so original in content. That kind of love is the best kind of love. Thanks for sharing, I have enjoyed your poem today .
DiMino Avatar
May 10, 2018 at 6:41 PM
Thank you, Pixie; have a beautiful day!
Furgason Avatar
May 6, 2018 at 8:28 PM
That was beautiful and so true,, :)
DiMino Avatar
May 7, 2018 at 4:30 PM
Thank you, Jackie; this means a lot to me. Have a beautiful day my friend!
Sathasivam Avatar
May 6, 2018 at 7:48 AM
Excellent. Well penned. Thanks for sharing it.
DiMino Avatar
May 7, 2018 at 4:29 PM
Thank you so much! Blessings Ravi!
Sands Avatar
May 5, 2018 at 2:27 PM
Very nicely written Joe :)
DiMino Avatar
May 5, 2018 at 7:34 PM
Thank you very much, Heidi; greatly appreciate the encouragement. Have a beautiful day!
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