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If I Were the Rain

` a steady downpour falls in cold droplets encouraged by a gusty breeze and I feel bad for you as the rain drips through a half opened window dampening your already shivering skin but I also wish I were that rain for if I were, it would be me touching you right now

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Juliet Ligon

Date: 11/6/2019 4:17:00 PM

How sweet.

Chris Green
Date: 11/6/2019 4:23:00 PM

Glad you liked it Juliet. :)

Craig Cornish

Date: 10/21/2019 11:13:00 AM

Wonderfully thought Chris & the take from negative to positive is romantic and hopeful.

Chris Green
Date: 10/21/2019 11:29:00 AM

Thanks so much Craig. I am happy you liked this one.

Paul Callus

Date: 10/17/2019 12:53:00 PM

You aptly make use of the rain to make a romantic pass at someone you have your eyes on, Chris:) I'm sure if she knew your intentions she'd open the window wide! ~ Regards // paul

Chris Green
Date: 10/17/2019 1:04:00 PM

Thanks so much Paul but maybe I should bring an umbrella along, just in case. : )

M. L. Kiser

Date: 10/17/2019 8:43:00 AM

This reads very smoothly and has a rain-like effect on the reader's psyche. Well done.

Chris Green
Date: 10/17/2019 9:11:00 AM

I appreciate your kindness M.L.

Hello There

Date: 10/16/2019 10:41:00 PM

Whew ~ I couldn't read this earlier, but I'm glad I was able to bring my spirit here this evening. It's like a breath of fresh air ~ moist but lovely <3

Chris Green
Date: 10/17/2019 7:00:00 AM

Thanks so very much HT. Didn't want to let a little rain dampen things too much.

John Hamilton

Date: 10/16/2019 7:36:00 PM

Yeah love this one Chris, reminds me of my song I wish I was, I think you might like it!

Chris Green
Date: 10/17/2019 6:59:00 AM

I am sure I would my friend. Thanks so much John

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/16/2019 5:14:00 PM

totally warmed by this sweet work, cris!...let is rain... huggs

Chris Green
Date: 10/16/2019 5:21:00 PM

Thank you so very much Nette. I appreciate your kind words today

Ilene Bauer

Date: 10/16/2019 4:20:00 PM

nicely done, chris, and refreshing to read on a dreary day...

Chris Green
Date: 10/16/2019 4:27:00 PM

Thanks Ilene. I heard you were getting rain up there. The Yankees/Astros game was cancelled.

Eve Roper

Date: 10/16/2019 4:09:00 PM

I love it, a touch of rain with a love to remember.. hugs

Chris Green
Date: 10/16/2019 4:15:00 PM

Thank you Eve. It is so nice to see you. I am happy you liked this one.

Sandra Adams

Date: 10/16/2019 3:43:00 PM

Only you could make something good out of your rainy day. I guess it’s still rainy in your corner of the world or you just have a really good imagination. What’s not to love about this beautiful poem, wonderful write my friend :) hugs

Chris Green
Date: 10/16/2019 3:56:00 PM

It's still a little damp outside and much cooler than usual. Thank you Sandy for your kind words, hey you've got make the best of every day regardless of the weather, right? : )