Beata Agustin Poet Diminished Hexaverse

If I Were Immortal

If immortal I
would be in this world
my soul would be vexed
forever struggling
against transgressions...

Immortal I
will be midst love
grace, peace and joy
by faith in Christ...

Immortal*
as promised
in heaven...

praise-filled
thanking...

God.

*2Timothy 1:10 But is now made manifest by the appearing of our Saviour Jesus Christ, who hath abolished death, and hath brought life and immortality to light through the gospel.

April 20, 2022
1st place, "If I Were Immortal" Poetry Writing Contest
Sponsored by Anoucheka Gangabissoon; judged on 5/2/2022.

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Beryl Edmonds May 3, 2022 at 11:57 AM A wonderful Diminished Hexaverse Beata, congratulations on your first place win in Anoucheka’s contest… Belle

Christuraj Alex May 3, 2022 at 4:40 AM Beautiful Diminished Hexa verse on immortality. Congratulations!

Len Gasun May 2, 2022 at 8:44 PM Beautiful and encouraging poem in beautiful form! Congratulations on your win my dear friend! God bless! Hugs

Eve Roper May 2, 2022 at 12:32 PM Awesome write, congratulations on your win. Blessings my friend

Joanna Daniel May 2, 2022 at 7:58 AM Wonderful convictions, Beata, congratulations on your worthy win:)

Alexis Y. May 2, 2022 at 6:53 AM WoW! Beta, Congratulations on your top win. It was well deserved. Have a nice day;-)Alexis

Andrea Dietrich April 23, 2022 at 12:16 PM Wonderful poetry. You chose the perfect form for this.

Valsa George April 23, 2022 at 4:36 AM Your first stanza is so arresting ! Immortality here will multiply the chances of transgressions ! In Heaven after our earthly life, let us stay immortal thanking and praising God ! Brief, beautiful and powerful, Beata !