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If I Were Blind

I wish I were blind, at least I would hear, smell, and feel the world more deeply. Evil and violence would not be seen by me. They say that what the eyes don’t see, the heart doesn’t feel. I would have more peace if I were blind, because I would never see war. I would choose a true woman, not based on her physical beauty, but on her feelings and her way of being. If I were blind, I wouldn't see the sky, but I would hear better the sound of the waves rushing to the shore, like the sound of a crowd singing a beautiful song. I wouldn’t see the fish and the shellfish, but I would better feel their taste. I wouldn’t see the rain falling on the earth, but I would better smell the scent of fresh soil the next day, and carry in my hands the jubilant mushrooms. If I were blind, I would be happier, because happiness does not depend on what is seen, but on what is felt. You don’t need to see to believe, you need to feel to believe. Feeling teaches more than an image. If I were blind, I wouldn’t see my beloved’s smile, but I would hear more clearly her tender words of love. If I were blind, my eyes wouldn’t betray me. If I were blind, I would be wiser, because I would listen better. If I were blind, I would see the world better with the eyes of feeling.

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Date: 4/16/2025 11:05:00 PM
Claudio congratulations on your win in my contest with your wonderfully inspiring write! I was impressed by your empathetic tone and creative approach as to put yourself in a blind person’s world and experiences. Bravo. Welcome to poetry soup as well and thanks for supporting my contest!
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Claudio Pimentel
Date: 4/17/2025 1:57:00 AM
Thanks Dear Karen!
Date: 4/14/2025 8:21:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Claudio Pimentel
Date: 4/17/2025 1:57:00 AM
Thanks Dear Beata!

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