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If I Were An Elephant

Don't cover me with a mantle of glitter For a circus parade that flaunts A pretentious kaleidoscopic dream, Where I am tricked to enchant an audience Paying hard-earned bills while I roll on a tyke-- Or use my ivory as decor for varnished tables, Chests and even antique inlays on narra beds: And my furry skin you peel, turn into Stilettos, even haute- couture labels designed Only for those vain magnates...how impertinent! I am the spirit of the wild forest, The towering giant of peace on a roam Where my ears listen to children's fables As they mount on my back through a landscape Bathed in night's purple glow... a mystique Setting a ride into a dazzled starlight, While we strut away, unmindful of how dense mankind can be in this journey Soothed by fresh murmuring of a breeze... If I were an elephant, let me rock, indulge On a sacred place made innocent By the gods who created playful, grassy trails. For Rob Carmack's Screwed XV1 Contest Submitted 3/01/2017 ----------------------- Originally Written 12..13..2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Martin Avatar
March 9, 2017 at 11:46 AM
Like an elephant, I won't forget this poetry. Great use of language Nette! Mark :-)
Inman Avatar
March 9, 2017 at 7:02 AM
Gorgeous write Nette. The third stanza is absolutely beautiful.
Dietrich Avatar
December 14, 2016 at 3:56 PM
Nette, I just loved all these many beautiful elephant poems. Yours is very special too. Awesome poem.
Ball Avatar
December 13, 2016 at 12:47 AM
Beautiful. I love elephants. So gentle and sensitive for such a huge animal. Highly intelligent they suffer great wrong at the hands of man. Great job. God Bless, JB
Vinson Avatar
December 12, 2016 at 11:47 PM
Hypnotically beautiful, Nette.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 12, 2016 at 7:21 PM
The elephant has a hard life! Nice write, Nette!
Marty Avatar
December 12, 2016 at 2:41 PM
Goodness, a stunning blend of reality and innocence woven through this stellar poem!
Andresen Avatar
December 12, 2016 at 1:24 PM
- "I am the spirit of the wild forest" .... so let the elephants live in peace - Lovely poem, Nette - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Green Avatar
December 12, 2016 at 12:17 PM
You have captured the beauty and majesty of the beast Nette. Your poem is soft and calmly expressive though your point hits home hard. Nicely done my friend.
Flats Avatar
December 12, 2016 at 11:59 AM
sigh... It's what your PO's always make me do. Like an exquisite blend of mukhwas, refreshing to the palate, cleansing to the soul, a touch of sweet, a taste of bitter, but always, soothing and refreshing. Huglets ~ john
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