If I Were An Elephant

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Don't cover me with a mantle of glitter For a circus parade that flaunts A pretentious kaleidoscopic dream, Where I am tricked to enchant an audience Paying hard-earned bills while I roll on a tyke-- Or use my ivory as decor for varnished tables, Chests and even antique inlays on narra beds: And my furry skin you peel, turn into Stilettos, even haute- couture labels designed Only for those vain magnates...how impertinent! I am the spirit of the wild forest, The towering giant of peace on a roam Where my ears listen to children's fables As they mount on my back through a landscape Bathed in night's purple glow... a mystique Setting a ride into a dazzled starlight, While we strut away, unmindful of how dense mankind can be in this journey Soothed by fresh murmuring of a breeze... If I were an elephant, let me rock, indulge On a sacred place made innocent By the gods who created playful, grassy trails. For Rob Carmack's Screwed XV1 Contest Submitted 3/01/2017 ----------------------- Originally Written 12..13..2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 3/9/2017 11:46:00 AM
Like an elephant, I won't forget this poetry. Great use of language Nette! Mark :-)
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Date: 3/9/2017 7:02:00 AM
Gorgeous write Nette. The third stanza is absolutely beautiful.
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Date: 12/14/2016 3:56:00 PM
Nette, I just loved all these many beautiful elephant poems. Yours is very special too. Awesome poem.
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Date: 12/13/2016 12:47:00 AM
Beautiful. I love elephants. So gentle and sensitive for such a huge animal. Highly intelligent they suffer great wrong at the hands of man. Great job. God Bless, JB
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Date: 12/12/2016 11:47:00 PM
Hypnotically beautiful, Nette.
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Date: 12/12/2016 7:21:00 PM
The elephant has a hard life! Nice write, Nette!
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Date: 12/12/2016 2:41:00 PM
Goodness, a stunning blend of reality and innocence woven through this stellar poem!
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Date: 12/12/2016 1:24:00 PM
- "I am the spirit of the wild forest" .... so let the elephants live in peace - Lovely poem, Nette - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/12/2016 12:17:00 PM
You have captured the beauty and majesty of the beast Nette. Your poem is soft and calmly expressive though your point hits home hard. Nicely done my friend.
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Date: 12/12/2016 11:59:00 AM
sigh... It's what your PO's always make me do. Like an exquisite blend of mukhwas, refreshing to the palate, cleansing to the soul, a touch of sweet, a taste of bitter, but always, soothing and refreshing. Huglets ~ john
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