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If I were a flower

A blossom I’ll be on the wreaths for peace An offering to deity to feed world’s hungry I’ll be the garden on every troubled street Preening as gleefully as exuberant tulips Swaying with spring in rhythms of daffodils I’ll be the laudable bouquet of friendship An emissary of cupid when love is elusive A gift I’ll be, from souls of dreams romantic I’ll be the cure when dear-heart is aching A sensuous rose I’ll be, alluring bride to be I’ll be sweet smile of expressions in violet Pleasing smitten hearts on lilac landscapes Presenting bell-shaped English bluebells Tenderly in aura of angel’s blessed grace I’ll be the enlightenment in lotus of solace Lovingly I’ll answer every call of your will In colors of hyacinth upon your window sills And fragrance of white Lily evoking revelry Composing gaily dulcet themed melodies Strumming floral kisses on your sateen lips January 31, 2021 Placed 2nd: If I were a flower premium contest

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Date: 8/20/2021 1:03:00 AM
"I’ll be sweet smile of expressions in violet Pleasing smitten hearts on lilac landscapes" so gorgeously done! Wow!
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Date: 3/2/2021 4:17:00 PM
I see this is number 2 in the top 100 poems. Well done!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/4/2021 8:18:00 AM
Thank you Richard. Much appreciate.
Date: 3/2/2021 7:03:00 AM
"The laudable bouquet of friendship," beautiful expression. Congratulations of your win for this wonderful poem, Vijay.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/2/2021 7:50:00 AM
Thank you Carol--much appreciate.
Date: 3/1/2021 10:05:00 AM
This is beautiful, Vijay. Cheers :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/2/2021 7:50:00 AM
Thank you, Ansar.
Date: 2/28/2021 12:28:00 PM
Oh, I can almost breathe in the scent of the beautiful flowers, and the peace and love this beautiful poem emits! Lovely poetic piece that reads almost like a song. Wonderful beauty Vijay. Congratulations on your win, very well deserved!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/28/2021 1:24:00 PM
Much appreciate, BJ--many thanks for your visit and comments.
Date: 2/28/2021 11:54:00 AM
Vivid beauty of those flowers!! Congrats Vijay!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/28/2021 1:23:00 PM
Thank you Smita--much appreciate.
Date: 2/27/2021 4:43:00 AM
Vijay: What beautiful reflective thoughts on flowers. If I were a flower I hope you’d put me on your windowsill A real winner for me and Fav’d. SuZ
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/27/2021 8:20:00 AM
So very kind of you. Much appreciate SuZ. Many thanks. And a very special thank you for the FAVE.
Date: 2/26/2021 5:01:00 AM
I can that this poem was placed. Congratulations on your well deserved win Vijay. Regards
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/27/2021 8:19:00 AM
Thank you--much appreciate.
Date: 2/18/2021 1:53:00 PM
Congrats on a very well deserved win.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/24/2021 12:31:00 PM
Much appreciate Andrea--many thanks.
Date: 2/18/2021 1:10:00 PM
Lovely Vijay. I'll say it again, You are a master of beautiful description. Well done and congrats on a well deserved win. God Bless, JB
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/24/2021 12:31:00 PM
Thank you Judy--much appreciate.
Date: 2/16/2021 1:31:00 PM
Just stopping back with congratulations, Vijay. What an awesome win!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/24/2021 12:31:00 PM
Thank you Carolyn--much appreciate.
Date: 2/14/2021 8:03:00 AM
I can see why this lovely bouquet has been honoured with a win. Great personification Vijay. Congrats on your win.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/24/2021 12:30:00 PM
Much appreciate Richard--many thanks.
Date: 2/12/2021 2:14:00 AM
Amazing! nothing more need be said! Congrats on your win!!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/12/2021 5:54:00 AM
Much appreciate Krish--many thanks for your visit and comments.
Date: 2/11/2021 1:54:00 PM
I see that congratulations are in order, Vijay! Flowers are a good source of inspiration, and you made great use of that! Excellent personification. ~ Regards // paul
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/12/2021 5:53:00 AM
Thank you Paul--much appreciate.
Date: 2/10/2021 12:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win... I knew it!!!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/10/2021 7:35:00 AM
Thank you Supraja--much appreciate.
Date: 2/8/2021 1:02:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for this "floral tribute" expressed by your poetic pen. God bless you.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/8/2021 6:17:00 AM
Thank you Beata--much appreciate.
Date: 2/7/2021 8:13:00 AM
Vijay, I had forgotten all the emotions that are expressed through flowers in bloom. Thank you for this wonderful reminder. -Richard
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/7/2021 12:56:00 PM
Much appreciate Richard--many thanks.
Date: 2/6/2021 10:54:00 PM
Wow, Shakespeare, you've done it again, such refined, amazing poetic flow in your cleverly interwoven verses. So well penned my friend. Hugs and blessings,
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/7/2021 7:17:00 AM
Much appreciate Jennifer--many many thanks.
Date: 2/6/2021 5:40:00 PM
Fine to the nines! Floral expressions of love!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/7/2021 7:17:00 AM
Much appreciate Chuck--many thanks.
Date: 2/5/2021 12:11:00 PM
excellent poem penned...
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/5/2021 2:17:00 PM
Thank you Pashang--much appreciate.
Date: 2/5/2021 11:39:00 AM
Your writing certainly blooms like a flower here.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/5/2021 2:17:00 PM
Much appreciate Robert--many thanks.
Date: 2/5/2021 10:17:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a "beautiful" flower in your garden or bouquet. I love your line, "Tenderly in aura of angel’s blessed grace." Enjoy your win/day with blessings..............
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/5/2021 2:17:00 PM
Glad you stopped by with your kind feedback, Paula. Much appreciate--many thanks.
Date: 2/5/2021 6:29:00 AM
A beauty! Love the romance, sensuality. Love reference to Cupid and the final line!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/5/2021 2:16:00 PM
Much appreciate Kim--many thanks.
Date: 2/4/2021 9:24:00 PM
Hi Vijay, I'm not surprised you are placed so high. Congratulations on a fine win. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/5/2021 2:15:00 PM
Thank you Alexis--much appreciate.
Date: 2/4/2021 1:40:00 PM
I'm so glad she gave you a high placement. It was truly a deserving win!! Congrats.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/5/2021 2:15:00 PM
Thank you Andrea. BIG congrats to you as well.
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