Ravi Sathasivam Poet Light Verse

If I Were

If I were.......

If I were the sun, I would brighten up your day
make your dream come true like a sun shine
and you will live with happiness for ever

If I were the moon, I would sail along with you
Bring you the garland made of stars
and you will feel your love never be sad

If I were the wind, I would blow you a kiss 
Bring you romantic love in your heart
and you will free to hold me tight without shyness

If I were the rain, I would wash your sorrow
Bring you happiness that shower like waterfalls
and you will see your tears vanish for ever

If I were the cold, I would touch you gently
Bring you loving breeze to hold me closely
and you will see my love for you is greatly

Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka
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Poet Destroyer A June 9, 2014 at 7:58 AM thank you for the reply and the visit on my poem..Linda

Lucilla Carrillo June 8, 2014 at 9:45 PM How sweet is life, how sweet is love. how sweet that you writ a sweet poem like this. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla Ravi Sathasivam June 9, 2014 at 1:50 AM Thanks for your comment. Appreciated

Kenisha Shines June 4, 2014 at 8:58 AM beautiful write Ravi Sathasivam June 9, 2014 at 1:50 AM Thanks for your comment. Appreciated

Skat A May 28, 2014 at 7:05 PM Ravi, i enjoyed this poem. romantic, and beautiful......SKAT Ravi Sathasivam June 9, 2014 at 1:49 AM Thanks for your comment. Appreciated

Poet Destroyer A May 28, 2014 at 12:19 PM You are a lovely person Ravi, and it's nice to have you around... thank you for commenting my comment...Linda Ravi Sathasivam June 9, 2014 at 1:49 AM Thanks for your comment. Appreciated

Len Gasun May 28, 2014 at 11:35 AM This is a very beautiful poem of love my dear friend Ravi. I love it and thoroughly enjoyed reading it tonight. Thank you so much for sharing! Big hugs! love lots, Leonora Ravi Sathasivam June 9, 2014 at 1:49 AM Thanks for your comment. Appreciated

Shadow Hamilton May 28, 2014 at 7:13 AM a powerful poem of love Ravi enjoyed it very much ty for visiting my page hugs Ravi Sathasivam May 28, 2014 at 8:22 AM Thanks for your comment. Appreciated.

Andrea Dietrich May 27, 2014 at 11:37 PM this is very nice, very sweet, ravi. You are a beautiful dreamer! Ravi Sathasivam May 27, 2014 at 11:46 PM Thanks for your comment. Appreciated.

Lena Emp May 27, 2014 at 11:25 PM The rhyme of every words is so soothing and a pleasant to read. This calm and soothing. Lovely poem. Ravi Sathasivam May 27, 2014 at 11:46 PM Thanks for your comment. Appreciated.

Poet Destroyer A May 27, 2014 at 7:28 PM Ravi, this is lovely. I truly feel the love, and the tender pleasing love. A very warm feeling, to all you can be with whomever you wrote this for... xox..Linda Ravi Sathasivam May 27, 2014 at 11:46 PM Thanks for your comment. Appreciated.

Sara Kendrick May 27, 2014 at 1:57 PM Ahh!!! Very romantic work..I am sure that the lady that received this heart felt work was glad that your love is so true..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara.. Ravi Sathasivam May 27, 2014 at 11:47 PM Thanks for your comment. Appreciated.

Elaine George May 27, 2014 at 11:06 AM Beautiful poem of love, Ravi. Thank you for sharing and thank you for your kind comments today. Lainie Ravi Sathasivam May 27, 2014 at 11:47 PM Thanks for your comment. Appreciated.

Nette Onclaud May 27, 2014 at 9:46 AM a lilting song so wonderfully done, ravi.. huggs Ravi Sathasivam May 27, 2014 at 11:47 PM Thanks for your comment. Appreciated.

Anne-Lise Andresen May 27, 2014 at 4:26 AM - You light up the day with your beautiful poems, Ravi - Always a pleasure to read your poems. - Beautiful !! - Have a nice day my friend! - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Ravi Sathasivam May 27, 2014 at 6:50 AM Thanks Anne. hugs