Simon Hamill Poet Rhyme

If I Was Younger

I don't know what I'm doing here,
Your driving me insane.
You make my heart do somersaults,
I don't even know your name.
Your smile is warm and tender
Your eyes the brightest star,
They could put you in a crowded room
I would know exactly where you are.
If I was ten years younger,
And a whole lot fitter too.
I would take you by the hand right now,
And run away with you.

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Charlotte Puddifoot January 30, 2021 at 3:38 PM sounds like an offer i'd have difficulty refusing haha :) Simon Hamill January 30, 2021 at 4:54 PM Hi charlotte I will have to write some more sloppy ones lol,take care.simon:)

Emilia James January 15, 2021 at 1:33 PM Naughty naughty Simon what would the wife say lol, Emilia. Simon Hamill January 16, 2021 at 3:04 AM Hi emilia.nice to hear from you.hope you had a great Xmas and New year.take care.simon

Gershon Wolf January 10, 2021 at 8:22 PM Ha, ha! She'll love you for your essence, Simon. Don't worry about the pounds! Go for her! Enjoyed this sweet write. :) gw Simon Hamill January 11, 2021 at 2:15 AM I wish.lol.my wife won't let me.haha.cheers.

Mystic Rose Rose January 3, 2021 at 5:01 AM Simon this is such a sweet poem, very tender and expressive. thank you for sharing. Simon Hamill January 5, 2021 at 7:49 AM Thank you.i just a hopeless romantic.lol.take care.simon:)

Linda Alice Fowler January 1, 2021 at 6:44 AM A cute, sweet write Simon. Don't sell yourself short - maybe she likes older men. :) Linda Simon Hamill January 1, 2021 at 7:53 AM Happy new year Linda,hope you had a good Xmas, doesn't matter how old we get we can still look,lol.take care.simon:)