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If I Was Younger

I don't know what I'm doing here, Your driving me insane. You make my heart do somersaults, I don't even know your name. Your smile is warm and tender Your eyes the brightest star, They could put you in a crowded room I would know exactly where you are. If I was ten years younger, And a whole lot fitter too. I would take you by the hand right now, And run away with you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 1/30/2021 3:38:00 PM
sounds like an offer i'd have difficulty refusing haha :)
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Simon Hamill
Date: 1/30/2021 4:54:00 PM
Hi charlotte I will have to write some more sloppy ones lol,take care.simon:)
Date: 1/15/2021 1:33:00 PM
Naughty naughty Simon what would the wife say lol, Emilia.
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Date: 1/16/2021 3:04:00 AM
Hi emilia.nice to hear from you.hope you had a great Xmas and New year.take care.simon
Date: 1/10/2021 8:22:00 PM
Ha, ha! She'll love you for your essence, Simon. Don't worry about the pounds! Go for her! Enjoyed this sweet write. :) gw
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Simon Hamill
Date: 1/11/2021 2:15:00 AM
I wish.lol.my wife won't let me.haha.cheers.
Date: 1/3/2021 5:01:00 AM
Simon this is such a sweet poem, very tender and expressive. thank you for sharing.
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Simon Hamill
Date: 1/5/2021 7:49:00 AM
Thank you.i just a hopeless romantic.lol.take care.simon:)
Date: 1/1/2021 6:44:00 AM
A cute, sweet write Simon. Don't sell yourself short - maybe she likes older men. :) Linda
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Simon Hamill
Date: 1/1/2021 7:53:00 AM
Happy new year Linda,hope you had a good Xmas, doesn't matter how old we get we can still look,lol.take care.simon:)

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