If I Ruled the World

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If I ruled the world, I'd build paradise; a safe haven and make it flourish and endure. The state of affairs would be diametrically different than they're today... If I ruled the world. If I ruled the world, I'd give all dreamers mighty wings to fly I'd pull the downtrodden and the oppressed up by the bootstraps. I'd eradicate corruption and famine. I'd give vagabonds a place to call home... If I ruled the world. If I ruled the world, Not one soul would stand at the edge of destiny, afraid to take a leap. All and sundry would live and prosper harmoniously; my solemn promise... If I ruled the world. If I ruled the world, I'd be the gift of sunshine for those frozen in a winter of malcontent The world would be devoid of wars; a better, happier, more peaceful place... If I ruled the world. If I ruled the world, No one would struggle with debt No one would be engulfed in the abyss of despair. The light of hope will continue to shine... If I ruled the world. If I Ruled The World Poetry Contest (Winner: 7th Place) Sponsored by Chantelle Anne Cooke Date written: 08/21/2020

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Jenna Logan

Date: 8/25/2020 5:32:00 PM

I'm delighted your poem was recognized in the top 10, Edward. Congratulations.

Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/25/2020 6:37:00 PM

Thank you so much, Jenna:-)

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 8/23/2020 5:01:00 AM

This is amazing and beautiful. I love it friend. God bless you always

Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/23/2020 5:11:00 AM

Thank you very much, Regina:-) I'm glad you did! Blessings <3

Hilo Poet

Date: 8/22/2020 7:09:00 PM

A welcomed world beheld by many, yet few can find the words, whereto, it breathlessly met you with ease, Edward, my best hopes for you my friend, Aloha! William

Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/22/2020 7:32:00 PM

Thank you so much for the lovely feedback and visit, William:-) Aloha!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/22/2020 5:20:00 AM

Quite meaningful and caring view of the world--a lesson for humanity in your words.

Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/22/2020 6:24:00 AM

Thank you very much, Vijay:-)

Jenna Logan

Date: 8/22/2020 5:04:00 AM

"Not one soul would stand on the edge of destiny, afraid to take a leap..." You have my vote for ruler of the world, Edward. What light you would shine into the dark abyss that is swallowing humanity. I applaud your lines and wish you the best in the contest.

Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/22/2020 6:26:00 AM

Thank you for the kind comments and vote of confidence, Jenna:-)